"Chicken Soup" by Ami Ven

[ami_ven]

Title: Chicken Soup
Author: Ami Ven
Prompt: Amnesty 2008; "Sickness and Health"
Rating: G
Character(s): whole team family-ness
Word Count: 942
Summary: Illnesses usually travel quickly between people in work environments, and NCIS is no exception.

Comments

[nakeisha]

*Chuckles*

Nicely done.

Great dialouge - I could really hear the voices of them all.

And I'm so chuffed to see you got all the team in.

[ami_ven]

Thank you. I love the team as a whole, and I try to work them all in when I can. I'm glad you liked it.

[nakeisha]

I did, very much indeed.

I enjoy team fics and you got Ducky in and sometimes people miss him out in team fics and Jimmy too.

So this was superb.

I've saved this to my hard drive for re-reading.

[ami_ven]

Um... I did mean one hundred six (106). Is that too high? I don't really get sick a lot... Still, I'm glad you thought it was cute. Thanks.

[ami_ven]

Oh, that's sounds most unpleasant. Lucky I have people who can tell me these things. Thanks!

[jumpfall]

This was adorably sweet! I love how one by one, the team slink into Autopsy (although I have to admit, my favourite line was: "Ducky was once again interrupted by the swish of the autopsy doors. Gibbs entered first, holding a reluctant and arguing McGee by the shoulder of his jacket. “Last one, Duck,” the senior agent said." -- I love the visual of Gibbs dragging McGee in to join everybody else.)

& I love that you included Jimmy in this, as well. =)

[ami_ven]

Thank you! I enjoy writing Jimmy (and everyone else, of course)- and I'm glad someone else could see the visual of Gibbs showing his concern by manhandling people.