Comments | ncis_flashfic: What Are Friends For? by Ashleigh Anpilova

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What Are Friends For? by Ashleigh Anpilova

Jan 06, 2009 13:47

TITLE: What Are Friends For?
AUTHOR: Ashleigh Anpilova
CHARACTERS: Leroy Jethro Gibbs & Tobias Fornell
GENRE: Gen (mention of Fornell/Diane)
RATING: G
SUMMARY: Following Diane walking out on him, Fornell goes to see Gibbs.
CHALLENGE Amnesty 2008 - 'Flash'
WORD COUNT: 616
AUTHOR'S NOTE: Written in half an hour.
DISCLAIMER: I don't own these ( Read more... )

challenge: flash, character: tobias fornell, character: leroy jethro gibbs, writer: nakeisha, challenge: amnesty, genre: general

Comments 13

riverotter1951 January 6 2009, 14:27:28 UTC

You have a marvelous touch. I have been following your NCIS stories. Each one is a gem showing a different aspect of Jethro and how he interacts with Ducky, the children and his friends.

More please.

nakeisha January 6 2009, 14:48:39 UTC

Thank you very much indeed for your kind words of praise. I am really touched by them.

And I'm glad to hear you see different aspects of Jethro in them in his various interactions - that is so good to know.

Oh, there will be.

Thank you again. You really have brightened my day.

londonsabre January 6 2009, 14:54:57 UTC

I'm awed that you wrote this in a half hour. I like your take on Gibbs. It was really beautiful...so much was said in just over 500 words.

nakeisha January 6 2009, 17:06:30 UTC

Thank you very much indeed.

I am so glad you enjoyed this so much and my take on Gibbs.

And thank you for the 'awed' comment too.

malnpudl January 6 2009, 16:54:32 UTC

Oh, nice. Friendship between men is a beautiful if often awkward thing, and I love how you've shown both their closeness and the delicate dance involved in expressing it.

nakeisha January 6 2009, 17:08:21 UTC

Thank you very much.

I'm really pleased to hear you liked this and their closeness came over well.

We know how much they care for one another, but they're not going to show it openly and overtly - not even to one another!

Thank you for reading.

ashley_pitt January 6 2009, 17:19:48 UTC

Gibbs can be very thoughtful at times.

nakeisha January 6 2009, 18:00:52 UTC

He can indeed.

Thanks for reading.

jumpfall January 6 2009, 23:08:22 UTC

"Least she didn't hit you round the head with a seven iron," he said, letting his grip linger, beyond that of just a casual friend's touch.

Fornell nodded once. He then looked up at Gibbs. "If it had meant leaving Emily with me, she could have done it."

Oh, Fornell. He's amazing as a character, and I love his interactions with Gibbs. This is so telling about where his priorities lie, and adorably heartwrenching.

nakeisha January 7 2009, 06:52:06 UTC

Thank you very much indeed.

I am so pleased to hear you enjoyed this.

I love Fornell and his friendship with Gibbs. They are close, but show it in a different way from the way Gibbs & Ducky do.