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kehleyr January 1 2008, 21:17:37 UTC
OMG you met Thom Gemcity??? *swoooons* :-)! This was so much fun to read :-)!

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xdawnfirex January 1 2008, 22:20:11 UTC
:D

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cathymg2 January 1 2008, 21:50:15 UTC
That was really, really cute! I like the NCIS-meets-real-people thing.

Good job!

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xdawnfirex January 1 2008, 22:20:26 UTC
Thanks! :) I had a lot of fun writing it.

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strangevisitor7 January 1 2008, 22:29:22 UTC
LOL!Fun Read. A true fan girl reaction. We are jealous that you met Thom Gemcity. ;P

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xdawnfirex January 1 2008, 22:37:15 UTC
Thanks! It was fun to write, too. :) Glad you enjoyed.

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citymusings January 1 2008, 22:30:26 UTC
I loved it! It was really good. Different from what I usually read, but a really good different!

Happy New Year!

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xdawnfirex January 1 2008, 22:37:40 UTC
So glad you liked it! Happy new year to you too :)

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periwinkle27 January 1 2008, 22:47:16 UTC
Archie Goodwin or Archie MacNally? I can't decide the influence.

Very well written in the breezy murder mystery style. There's a Man From UNCLE one you might like.

Loved this.

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xdawnfirex January 1 2008, 22:51:33 UTC
Actually, stream of consciousness. This is literally my train of thought as I worked my way through putting myself into the situation. After the crying and peeing myself and constantly insisting I didn't do anything wrong. :D

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periwinkle27 January 1 2008, 23:03:00 UTC
Ah, the Mary Sue influence then, grin.
Do you read mysteries by any chance?

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xdawnfirex January 1 2008, 23:08:41 UTC
Actually, not many. I read a lot of fantasy and science fiction, but I've never really done mysteries except for Sue Grafton's alphabet series.

Maybe I should... it might help me writing NCIS fic. :)

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