[TS2] She Came From Space || Prologue

[nb_fanfiction]

Comments

[pink77punk]

I like this. Interesting to see a story written from the perspective of the alien child. I like how it makes the story more personal. Keep writing, I want to see what happens next.

[noob_alchemist]

Thanks, I'm glad you like it!

[simgasmic]

Im very interested in where this is going and this being a flashback is amazing being in first person I think you should try writing the next chapter in 3rd person

[noob_alchemist]

I'm glad you like it!

[iliveforsleep]

I like it. I know what you mean about changing the perspective you generally write from, which is probably why I switch back and forth all of the time, even in the same story. I really liked the way this one was written so if you feel you can maintain it I would stick with 1st person, but if you think it is going to break you, nothing says they all have to be 1st person.

[noob_alchemist]

I'm glad you like it, and thanks for the advice :)

[noob_alchemist]

It's ok! :)
I'm glad you like it!

[madame_ugly]

Nice start.

I'm hoping we get to see a bit more of the siblings as the story fleshes out (yeah, I know it's about Amber but her family's obviously influenced her development).

[noob_alchemist]

Thanks!

When I send Bud to college, he'll be living with Amber until she graduates, and I'll be inviting the entire family over for parties.

I might end up developing a plot point or a sub-plot involving the siblings, but we'll have to see how things turn out :/