Teach Me To Love You, Chapter 6

Aug 13, 2008 14:56

Title: Teach Me To Love You ( Read more... )

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senna_chan August 13 2008, 13:33:48 UTC
*snickers* Oh, that was a funny part, where Iruka tried to say Kakashi's name. The rest of the drunken talk was also entertaining.

Ah, may I congratule you for a fine back-ground story you made for Iruka? I must say that he's grew much more stable from the first chapters, and personally I enjoy it. He shows here more sides of thim than earlier - I loved the scenes with Ebisu and the holed stone. ^_^

- Senna-chan

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nayru_kleinefee August 20 2008, 16:52:07 UTC
I tend to be cuddly when I'm drunk. Some people find it annoying and some (male) people find it great. I personally don't mind so much, I also know people who get violent, and that's definitely where the fun ends.
I was thinking really hard if I should torture poor Iruka so much but I think he is a battle-worn shinobi just like Kakashi or Gai or Genma or anybody else. He's had his share of cruelty, too.
As for Ebisu, somebody who hates Naruto can't be a good person.
Nayru

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celloeuse August 13 2008, 15:07:34 UTC
Sock vomit. SO using that.

And the Ebisu-attempting-to-drunkenly-rape-Iruka thing is one I'd definitely like to see explored more, if nothing else but to see Kakashi open a can of jounin-whoop-ass on someone. it doesn't even have to be Ebisu.

Wheeeeee.

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nayru_kleinefee August 20 2008, 16:54:29 UTC
I originally wanted to use the word for the stuff owl choke out after they ate/swallowed/whatever a mouse. But I couldn't find it in any dictionary, so I went with 'vomit'. But to be honest, Kakashi doesn't have to go all 'eew' since I own socks just like the ones Iruka's wearing, and they don't produce any sock vomit.
Nayru

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kakashilover3 August 13 2008, 19:44:53 UTC
Yay!!

new chapter

I love it!!!

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nayru_kleinefee August 20 2008, 16:55:02 UTC
Thanks. I'm working on the next one whenever I find the time.
Nayru

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animefreak03 August 13 2008, 20:37:12 UTC
HAAA finally someone who actually came up with a name for those damn cotton balls on your feet. I swear my mom was the other person who decided to call them sock poop >.< but yours sound much better. Sock Vomit HAAA, thank you for such a great chapter.

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nayru_kleinefee August 20 2008, 16:57:19 UTC
Eew, sock poop is a little too drastic for my taste. I'm always wondering where all those bits come from to such an amount and why there's still sock left even after months of wearing them.
Nayru

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nafilala August 16 2008, 12:32:21 UTC
Uwaaaah ~ ! The last little bit with the lullaby's got my eyes watering! T~T So sweet, bless... ^^
I can barely symphathise, since I didn't get lullabys either... (I'm certain that if I had my ears would have exploded. My mum's never been a very good singer... ^^'

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nafilala August 16 2008, 12:33:28 UTC
Ack, typo! ^~^'

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nayru_kleinefee August 20 2008, 16:58:53 UTC
Just like the apple pancakes, the lullabies are signs of something Kakashi didn't know before - care. I can perfectly imagine Iruka singing for his Jounin and stroking his hair until Kakashi falls asleep.
Nayru

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