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Teach Me To Love You, Chapter 5

Jul 20, 2008 20:59

Title: Teach Me To Love You ( Read more... )

Comments 33

babaca July 20 2008, 20:25:29 UTC

I've really enjoyed this story. And the verbal tug of war between Pakkun and Kakashi over the bed was hilarious. I knew Pakkun was a cuddlebunny even if he didn't think so. ^___^

nayru_kleinefee July 22 2008, 10:48:45 UTC

Nobody can resist Iruka, not even Pakkun. I at first really thought about letting his brothers join them, too, but I guess there wouldn't have been enough space for Kakashi anymore then...
Nayru

kita_the_spaz July 20 2008, 21:04:24 UTC

OMG, you updated! I've been reading this story since the first time you posted. I'm sorry I never commented before. ~slaps stupid lurker self~
This was a wonderful chapter from Iruka's replacing the curtains to Kakashi being jealous of his own summon.

I giggled at Kakashi being hugged by all the kids. And I'm right there with you about Iruka not needing to be anything but a chuunin. He's fine just the wayhe is, though I am really really curious what you've got planned for him!

nayru_kleinefee July 22 2008, 10:51:25 UTC

I think with the curtains it's like with the apple pancakes, it's the little things that show how much Iruka loves him and that put Kakashi at ease although he doesn't understand why.
As for Iruka, I am trying to put into words right now what I planned without making him seem either wussy or overly powerful. Not as easy as I expected it to be, but I'm trying.
Nayru

Yes yes yes yes yes! antholyza July 20 2008, 21:22:13 UTC

Yay, there is more! I check your site every now and again, and I wasn't really expecting anything since you said you were busy, but there is more! Yay!

Thanks for more written goodness. ^^

Re: Yes yes yes yes yes! nayru_kleinefee July 22 2008, 10:52:19 UTC

Thanks. I am busy still but I hope it'll get better soon. I really don't want to need four weeks again for the next chapter...
Nayru

cjandre July 20 2008, 21:26:07 UTC

My favorite part, without a doubt, was when Kakashi was imagining Tsunade sending a line of shinobi to Iruka's bed for the energy boost!

Genki! Genki!

LOL

I love this story.

nayru_kleinefee July 22 2008, 10:53:23 UTC

Just imagine that, several ANBU and Jounin squeezing themselves into Iruka's bed and leaving no space for Kakashi! Poor little Jounin...
Nayru

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nayru_kleinefee July 22 2008, 10:54:56 UTC

Oh, jealousKakashi's great! But he's simple in his way of thinking: There's this man hurting his boyfriend, and that JUST CAN'T BE! Protective bastard...
Nayru