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Jun 18, 2009 13:01

Ichigo flinched as Rukia placed an ice pack next to his face.

“There,” she sighed as she sat across from him while he fixed the position of the pack. “That should help with the swelling.”

Only an indistinguishable mutter was her answer as he continued to scowl while staring at the ground. He knew she was watching him, but he was just not in the ( Read more... )

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annie_08 June 19 2009, 12:10:51 UTC
<3 I love it. It's really funny especially when Orihime asked Rukia what was she doing :3

Good job, love <3

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naviji June 24 2009, 04:41:13 UTC
<33 Thank you, Annie for all of your help and encouragement with this. Couldnt have done it without you *glomps*

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escarboucle June 19 2009, 16:35:52 UTC
See, you can do it XDDD

Good job Nav :P

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naviji June 24 2009, 04:42:19 UTC
hehe XD

Thanks, Syn *hugs*

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<33333333333 peca_06 June 19 2009, 17:26:59 UTC
AAAAAAH wonderful dear ^_^. Your hard work paid of. I totally love the end result. LOL at Ichigo giving Rukia directions to get the food from under the table while fighting an erection XDDDDDD priceless ^_~. Very sweet, tender and naughty without being over the top. Lol at Renji's reaction too XD (bunch of pervy friends they have lol hahaha). You did the meat spread justice :D ...phew! is it HOT in here or what...? *fans self*

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Re: <33333333333 naviji June 24 2009, 04:44:21 UTC
<333 thank you, Peca <3333 LOL I'm happy you enjoyed it. It was fun getting to write something different like this ;)

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ashidofanx June 21 2009, 07:28:25 UTC
Great job there, Navi. :D
Rukia is so cute. <3

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naviji June 24 2009, 04:42:58 UTC
Thank you Ashido Fan <333 *hugs* I'm glad you liked!

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ylla19 June 23 2009, 18:04:32 UTC
WHOA WHOA WHOA is what I can say. HAHAA!
Over-all, I love it! HAHA! I love how you depicted how hot Ichigo and Rukia are for each other. You made them rough and gentle to each other on right timings. XD The deep feelings they have for each other (or at least, the feelings I am DREAMING they have for each other) is present in the fic despite of the physical or shall I say sexual tension and their humungous physical attraction. XD

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naviji June 24 2009, 04:47:16 UTC
aahhhh Ylla! *glomps* happy to see you hheeree! XD

heheh I'm so happy you liked! Thank you so much for the very sweet comment! *hugs hugs*

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ylla19 June 24 2009, 05:56:47 UTC
YAY! I am happy to have found your LJ too! Muahaaa! I'll be stalking you nao so beware! XP *hugggs*

Oh, by the way, is it alright if I add you here too? :]

And you're welcome. Your fic so deserves it. :D

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naviji June 24 2009, 06:19:24 UTC
bwaahhaha! know that the stalking works both ways! >3

hehe of course you can add me! In fact, I shall go add you first! fufu! >333

*hugs* thank you!

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