Slash HP/SS HP/DM SS/LM

[naturegirlrocks]

Title/Link: On the grave side (HARRY POTTER SLASH)
Author: me
Beta: forest_rose  (Thank you)
Summary: Snapes dead and Harry visits his grave
Rating:  Some bad language, sexual implications
Characters/Pairing: HP/SS HP/DM SS/LM
Word Count: 1200
A/N: Have now checked grammar and spelling (don't judge me to hard - English is not my first language)

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Comments

[forest_rose]

This is really sweet - poor Harry, I love the image of him trying to hold on to Snape's last breath. And the ending is really funny!

You've done a really good job on a fic that's not in your first language! There are just a few errors you've missed - I won't point them out here, but if you'd like me to beta it for you then feel free to send me a private message and I'll give you my email address.

Great story, thank you for sharing!

[naturegirlrocks]

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
I would be very nice of you to beta for me. I write in english so I can practice and learn more.
(It is funny though, when I write in swedish many say that I use to much english grammar)

[obnoxiousbrat]

This was very lovely!
I love the images you developed.
For a first fic, this is amazing work.
:D

[naturegirlrocks]

Thank you. Snarry was my first love, but then I discovered Drarry - This was kind of a symbol of this.