You Look Beautiful In Chocolate.

[naturedichotomy]

Title: You Look Beautiful In Chocolate.
Fandom: Death Note
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Hal(le)xMello.
Genre: Smexins.
A/N: Written for the Death Note Kink Meme on  moonchild10 's journal. The prompt was: "Pairing: Hal/Mello (yes, as in Hal on Mello)
Kink: Fem-dom and chocolate sauce." I gave it a try and it pretty quickly became Mello'sfirsttime!kindadubcon!

Comments

[mochalatt3]

Hot, with just enough emotion and thought process going on to balance out the sex. Great job :)

[naturedichotomy]

Thank you!

I'm not too used to writing smut, so I'm really glad to be getting positive reactions ^_^

[kumaradosha]

This was so hot, the descriptions so good, that I read it several times~ Wonderful job! I'd never quite been able to accustom my mind to dominant Halle on Mello, but you worked it out quite nicely! You made it quite believable that it was Mello's first time, too. I greatly enjoyed this~!

[naturedichotomy]

Thank you so much!

Your comment made me smile like crazy. I'm always worried when I start writing in a new fandom, so I'm really happy that you liked it XD

[cobrarenenutet]

Gorgeous ^^

[naturedichotomy]

Thank you ^_^