Comments | naturedichotomy: The Tell-Tale Doodles.

naturedichotomy

The Tell-Tale Doodles.

Jan 06, 2010 12:47

There, another pairing I can cross off of my Shipper Challenge for myself. . . KyoxTama! I decided it counts even though it only consists of Tama's secret longing in this fic.

Title: The Tell-Tale Doodles.
Fandom: Ouran High School Host Club
Rating: PG-13? Somewhere between that and PG.
Pairing: TamakixKyouya, HikaruxKaoru
Genre: Humor, sort of.
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boys who kiss boys, pairing: hikaxkao, humor, fanfic, fandom: ouran, fluff, slash, pairing: kyouyaxtamaki

Comments 25

ehrenyu January 9 2010, 17:21:18 UTC

ROFL. Kinda wished I coulda seen Tamaki's reaction. XDD Very nice dialogue. Very typical of the twins to place innuendo in everyday things, no? :D Sorta wish there was a bit more detail. Otherwise, great characterization~ ♥

naturedichotomy January 9 2010, 18:14:50 UTC

Haha, I'm glad you think they're in character XD I thought it seemed like the twins to do something like that.

A bit more detail? Thanks for the critique! I know that's been a fault of mine lately, and I shall try to work on it ^_^

starrose17 January 9 2010, 17:50:11 UTC

LOL Love it, aww Tamaki XD

naturedichotomy January 9 2010, 18:11:17 UTC

Thank you! I love clueless Tamaki.

Oh goodness. By the way, your Harry Potter amvs have been my favorites for. . . like. . . years.

starrose17 January 9 2010, 18:12:31 UTC

omg that was an unexpected response LOL But thank you XD

are_late January 9 2010, 18:13:11 UTC

Kaoru leaned forward, chin on one upturned palm. “You can swing that way, right?”

Oh, you got me with that line. XD Nice work! I'd love to see Kyouya's reaction to that~

naturedichotomy January 9 2010, 18:19:14 UTC

Thanks! Kyouya's reaction, hmm? *tries to resist the urge to write it*

Cute icon, by the way ♥

are_late January 9 2010, 19:16:31 UTC

You're welcome! And do. Not. Resist. XD *indulges*

Ah, fellow Allen/Lavi shipper, I presume? ♥

naturedichotomy January 9 2010, 20:42:21 UTC

Oh yes! Laven forever! *cheers*

*runs off to write*

suaviorxchu January 9 2010, 19:05:41 UTC

This innuendo was very clever, especially Kaoru's remark about 'swinging his way'. I loved it! <3 If you were to continue this I would definitely read it!

naturedichotomy January 9 2010, 20:43:45 UTC

I'm glad you liked it and I'm going to at least try to continue it, so. . . stay tuned, I guess? Haha XD

akikitazawa January 9 2010, 20:31:17 UTC

Kaoru the little devil XD Nicely done, it was fun to read :D

naturedichotomy January 9 2010, 20:44:25 UTC

He just is, isn't he? ♥

Thanks for the compliment ^_^