'She Dreams in Color, She Dreams in Red,' Part 1 (A Collection of FiveSentenceFic drabbles)

[natural_blue_26]

Ok, first batch of these I'm putting out. I've been out of any fandom in anything other than observation mode for *years* so this is me essentially doing stretches before I jump back in the race. (Also, total newbie to LJ so if anyone has any pointers, with lj cutting, etc....)

Any and all productive critiques are welcome!

All are from Table One of 5sentence_fics 

Comments

[daythirtynine]

you make an lj cut like so:

(lj-cut text="click here for more or whatever")
all your content
(/lj-cut)

but you use the greater and less than signs instead of parentheses.

[natural_blue_26]

No- thank you for starting with that. Like I said, new to lj and between one crazy work schedule and the next I haven't had a lot of time to try and figure this out. Grateful for any/all advise on getting this to work :)

[daythirtynine]

and i felt that my actual comment on your writing should be in a different comment :) the first one was a great way to start these Rachel-centric drabbles. I don't really give much thought to her sisters but the first one was very powerful and sad to me. This looks like an interesting challenge that i'm now exploring for myself. a very good way to get back into writing in a fandom. these are all really great.

[natural_blue_26]

Ah, see I'm an oldest child myself, but I've read some truly interesting Jordan genfic along the way that got me thinking about her more. Sarah was a little young to be noticing much (probably) but Jordan's perfect to have the Jan Brady Marsh!Marsha!Marsh! syndrome that would make her hyper tuned into her older sister, etc.

Thank you for your comment!