Comments | natural_blue_26: ka_verse Prompt 9, 'Dot'

natural_blue_26

ka_verse Prompt 9, 'Dot'

Oct 14, 2010 12:41

( Since it was all in (debatably) light hearted fun, Marco supposes he really shouldn't be enjoying putting normally enthusiastically violent Rachel in a position where she was (black-mailed) encouraged to behave while he oh-so-kindly reminded her of their brief stint of legitimate traditional juvenile delinquency. )

fandom: animorphs, ka_verse, character: marco, character: rachel, fanfiction

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lisacharly October 14 2010, 21:19:38 UTC

Haha, very nice. Marco's so asking for it. And I absolutely love Jake choking on nothing (though I think that sentence has a typo/is missing a comma sorry for the unrequested beta every time I can't help it). And Ax not getting the game because it's dishonorable to lie is quite, quite in character. I enjoyed this muchly.

natural_blue_26 October 15 2010, 02:18:27 UTC

Note to self: do not post after not eating yet, because then words like "on nothing" happen twice somehow.... Hmmm....

I LOVE when Marco is asking for it! :D

I'm glad (as always) you liked it, and helpful reviews are always helpful, babe. ;)