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Haven't Met You Yet - Chapter 2: Your Smile

Mar 26, 2012 20:21

Title: Haven't Met You Yet
Author: natonato
Genre: School life, Slight Angst ,Fluff
Pairing: Yamajima, slight Nakachii
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Yamada was the heir of Johnny's Entertainment. He's indifferent attitude made teachers despise him but his good looks win the girls over. As he enters high school, he meets strange yet intriguing characters who made high ( Read more... )

s:hmyy, fanfiction, p:yamajima

Comments 8

yamajima91 March 26 2012, 15:05:05 UTC

spot!

off to read! XDDD

yamajima91 March 26 2012, 15:24:42 UTC

ahhhhkkkk!!!!

-->Yuto's mouth dropped wide open, his eyes contained excitement. Not the reaction that Yamada expected at all.

"Ya...Yam..Yamada-san, you talked to me! You talked. To. Me! I'm so happy!!" Yuto stressed the words "To, Me".<--

that part... i really, really thought YUTO would be hurt by yama-chan's words but uwaaahhh... I WAS LITERALLY bursting with laughter! what a shallow person he seems to be!

but during this part...

"Yuto stood there, motionless, in the middle of those laughing hyenas. His face, still wearing that silly grin of his but his eyes, so cold and so...so sad. But he didn't cry, those sad eyes didn't shed a single tear..." <--I know right away Yuto is more than just a happy face... that part made me super intrigued about who he really is! *can't wait to find that out in the later chapters!*

lastly...

-->"Wait, Yuto! You...you okay?"

And then, he smiled, the most beautiful smile Yamada had ever seen."Yes, thank you....Yama-chan! Really, thank you!"

He liked that smile. He wanted to see it again. * ( ... )

natonato March 26 2012, 16:02:46 UTC

Hahahaha. Wow. I'm speechless. Haha. Yeah. I had to rewrite this chapter so many times to get it right! haha. I'm glad u liked it ^^. Next chapter will be different! *hinthint

masquea March 27 2012, 02:16:16 UTC

SPOTSPOTSPOT. ARI SPOTS. :D
I'll come back when I can~! Finals are drowning me, literally, with work. Dx

natonato March 27 2012, 03:31:31 UTC

ohohohh. okay! then after reading, tell me ur opinion!! thanks!!

masquea March 27 2012, 17:52:00 UTC

WHAT THE...WHO THE JKLJSLDFJSDLF DO THESE PEOPLE THINK THEY ARE?! Bullying little cutesy Yutti like that /mumbles. Yama-chan is in love, whether he knows it or not. MWAHAHAHA. :D

Thank you for the update, na~ I'll wait for the next chappie. ouo

angeliquelia March 27 2012, 04:34:49 UTC

uwahhh, an update.
Yuto is really cute and he does has a nice smile,
and Yama-chan, what's with the attitude..
can't wait for next update
sorry for improper comment.
(not good in commenting)

natonato March 27 2012, 04:44:41 UTC

Yeah. yuto's smile is nice. But thanks for reading and commenting!! Yamada's attitude....hahaha.