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The Price of the Hunt

Jun 27, 2007 15:03

Title: The Price of the Hunt
Author: NativeStar
Word Count: 3,140
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I own nothing.

Summary: John struggles to deal with the aftermath when both Sam and Dean are injured on a hunt. Gen Wee!Chester, Dean is 12, Sam is 8.

A/N: Huge thank you to extraonions for the fantastic beta work. Her help and suggestions have been ( Read more... )

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supernatrlmommy June 27 2007, 14:40:58 UTC

I have to say, this was quite good. I loved the starkness of the fic, it totally accentuated the emotions and the terror that John was feeling. I found myself drawing parallels between this John and the one we saw during IMToD, when he sat and stared at Dean lying in the bed. The thoughts sounded like they could have been the same.

Great fic and I'll look for more when you're able. I'd love to know how they ended up getting hurt and see thier recovery.

Kat

nativestar June 27 2007, 15:06:25 UTC

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

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nativestar June 27 2007, 15:11:50 UTC

Thank you!! I don't mind if you friend me.

julibeth June 27 2007, 15:05:53 UTC

This was really good! Like the person above me said, it's a great parallel with IMYoD. I think my favorite part would have to be John carrying Sam into the PICU. It's somethign I can definately see happening,canonicaly speaking.

Thanks for writing it!

nativestar June 27 2007, 23:31:10 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

anonymous June 27 2007, 16:31:59 UTC

This was so sweet...loved Sammy having nightmares about Dean and John taking him up there. It broke my heart. :)

nativestar June 27 2007, 23:32:56 UTC

I'm glad you liked it :)

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nativestar June 27 2007, 23:44:09 UTC

Thank you so much! The sequel is on the way but it'll be a little while coming.