Comments | nathaniel_hp: Fic: Temptations (Remus/Ron, PG-13)

nathaniel_hp

Fic: Temptations (Remus/Ron, PG-13)

Jan 22, 2013 10:20

Title: Temptations
Characters/Pairing: Remus Lupin/Ron Weasley
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~ 2000
Summary: I can resist everything except temptation, said Oscar Wilde. Remus tries his best to resist even that, but a certain redhead is making things difficult.
Author's Notes:
Prompts: Trick: the Grim; Treat: Roast Turkey; Location: Knockturn Alley ( Read more... )

character: remus lupin, rating: pg-13, fic, pairing: remus/ron, character: ron weasley, my writing, challenge: rarepair_shorts

Comments 6

catsintheattic January 22 2013, 14:11:09 UTC

The beginning is wonderful - I love the sense of urgency and action that guides Remus's senses and decisions.

I can easily see how this story could have grown longer. So much worrying from Remus and fighting temptation. Ron is cute in his ignorance. :-)

nathaniel_hp February 7 2013, 07:51:26 UTC

Yep, this one should have been longer, but alas, deadlines ...

Glad to hear the beginning worked for you.

I might revisit the story again, who knows. :-) (You'll know about it before than anyone else, in any case ;) )

kath_ballantyne January 23 2013, 01:15:46 UTC

Loved this. I like Bill knowing what's going on

nathaniel_hp February 7 2013, 07:48:10 UTC

Thank you :)

I figured that after the attack, Bill would have talked to Remus quite a bit, so he'd know things that Remus wouldn't usually tell people. Now, there's an idea for another fic ...

Thank you for your comment ♥

tjs_whatnot January 31 2013, 05:39:00 UTC

♥

This was spectacular! You know what I sucker I am for Deathly Hallows era Remus/Ron and this was done masterfully. Poor Remus. :((

nathaniel_hp February 7 2013, 07:44:49 UTC

Thank you ♥

I was thinking of you when I wrote this, actually. It could do with some elaboration, especially towards the end, but you know how deadlines get in the way ;)