Fic: Chances

Feb 15, 2009 19:28


Title: Chances
Author: Kitty
Summary: Sometimes all we have is that one chance. From there, it's make-or-break baby.
Pairings: C/B/N triangle (But of course you know where my loyalties lie)
Warnings: Language and sexual references but nothing visual really.
Disclaimer: GG is not mine, the book or the series (if it were then B and N would be making ( Read more... )

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thesky_litup February 15 2009, 14:17:24 UTC
i forgot to post a review!

- LOVED IT!

loved your clever insertions of blip and end-game, definiteley noticed them and they were a nice touch! :D

i usually hate 1st person writing because in general it's done so badly, but you've really captured the voices so well and i enjoyed it so much!

it's abit film noir monologue actually, which is a very interesting device..

don't underestimate your fic writing abilities, you're doing a great job! <3

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moniegold February 15 2009, 15:18:11 UTC
like i've said to everyone else, thanks. :)

and i'm glad you noticed the insertions. i wasn't really expecting anyone to and was mostly just in an evil i-wanna-secretly-bash-cb mood. haha.

i'm also glad you didn't hate the fic for being in the 1st person. it really is a pretty hard perspective to write from. you have to constantly be in character while telling the story -- pretending to be a self-centered ass is not an easy feat! :))

oh and i must simply *blush* at your last sentence. :)

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hova4life February 15 2009, 19:47:05 UTC
Oh this was fabulous. Cheers to your NB loyalty! :p

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moniegold February 15 2009, 19:53:59 UTC
thanks! :)

nb 'til the end, definitely! :) <3

*by the way, i just realized i've been on this site for 24 hours now. or rather i've been visiting it every hour for 24 hours, if that makes sense. haha. :D

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lunafille February 15 2009, 21:45:09 UTC
Awww! This was awesome! I really enjoyed this and I love the NB love! YES!!! Great stuff! :D

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moniegold February 15 2009, 22:36:31 UTC
haha! yessss! thanks! :)

nb love all around please! :D

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bjoyjlaff February 16 2009, 00:38:03 UTC
Love it! And it's cool that you wrote it from their POV which you don't see a whole lot.
Beautiful :)

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moniegold February 16 2009, 02:44:06 UTC
thanks. :)

actually one good thing about shipping nb is that it's fairly easy to come by original plots or ideas. sometimes i think it's better to have a small ship with really dedicated people than a large ship that just ends up being lousy and overrated. *wink wink*

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jordan_alexa February 18 2009, 01:22:03 UTC
Amazing! Seriously, I couldn't stop smiling after I figured out that Blair and Nate were the couple. <3 Sucks for Chuck. Ha! && I looved the last paragraph. He sure was just a 'blip' ;)

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moniegold February 18 2009, 23:09:35 UTC
thanks! :)

actually a lot of the people who've read this at ffnet feel bad for chuck...or maybe that's just cause they're all pro-cb. some even got it into their heads that this is a cb fic. :)) what part about nb being endgame did they not get, i wonder.

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hova4life February 19 2009, 00:11:43 UTC
I'd love to have the ff link so I can add it to my favs <3

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moniegold February 19 2009, 04:23:40 UTC

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