Title: Chances
Author: Kitty
Summary: Sometimes all we have is that one chance. From there, it's make-or-break baby.
Pairings: C/B/N triangle (But of course you know where my loyalties lie)
Warnings: Language and sexual references but nothing visual really.
Disclaimer: GG is not mine, the book or the series (if it were then B and N would be making
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- LOVED IT!
loved your clever insertions of blip and end-game, definiteley noticed them and they were a nice touch! :D
i usually hate 1st person writing because in general it's done so badly, but you've really captured the voices so well and i enjoyed it so much!
it's abit film noir monologue actually, which is a very interesting device..
don't underestimate your fic writing abilities, you're doing a great job! <3
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and i'm glad you noticed the insertions. i wasn't really expecting anyone to and was mostly just in an evil i-wanna-secretly-bash-cb mood. haha.
i'm also glad you didn't hate the fic for being in the 1st person. it really is a pretty hard perspective to write from. you have to constantly be in character while telling the story -- pretending to be a self-centered ass is not an easy feat! :))
oh and i must simply *blush* at your last sentence. :)
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nb 'til the end, definitely! :) <3
*by the way, i just realized i've been on this site for 24 hours now. or rather i've been visiting it every hour for 24 hours, if that makes sense. haha. :D
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nb love all around please! :D
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Beautiful :)
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actually one good thing about shipping nb is that it's fairly easy to come by original plots or ideas. sometimes i think it's better to have a small ship with really dedicated people than a large ship that just ends up being lousy and overrated. *wink wink*
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actually a lot of the people who've read this at ffnet feel bad for chuck...or maybe that's just cause they're all pro-cb. some even got it into their heads that this is a cb fic. :)) what part about nb being endgame did they not get, i wonder.
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