Comments | nate_eliot: Greed | Eliot, Nate

knotted_rose in nate_eliot

Greed | Eliot, Nate | G

Jan 04, 2009 20:34

Title: Greed
Characters: Eliot, Nate
Author: Abbie Strehlow (knotted_rose)
Rating: G
Genre: Pre-slash
Spoilers: None
Summary: Eliot contemplates retrieving something for himself.
Disclaimer: Not mine. All theirs. Not diminishing canon. Expanding it.
Note: Originally posted in geteven_getfic for Seven Virtues challenge. Reposting at request of dante_s_hell.

( Greed )

pre-slash, g

Comments 6

shannonrita January 5 2009, 11:50:03 UTC

I like the whole "I WILL have what I want" vibe from Eliot. More?

knotted_rose January 5 2009, 14:52:42 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked this. My drabbles tend to be one-offs, but you never know. Thanks again for reading and commenting!

courtberger January 6 2009, 03:31:02 UTC

This is excellent! I can see Eliot thinking this, I can him looking at Nate and thinking that for now, everything is okay, but sooner or later he's going to take what he wants.

Outstanding work!

knotted_rose January 6 2009, 04:18:11 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked this. I do see Eliot as being patient. At least for now. *G*

cmk418 January 14 2009, 16:39:00 UTC

Very nice. I love the way you find common ground between the two of them and the last group of lines at the end is just terrific.

knotted_rose January 14 2009, 19:34:05 UTC

As we've seen more of Eliot, I think we've seen more that he does consider himself more of a good guy, more like Nate. I don't think Eliot always sees himself as a theif. And I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for commenting.