tq very much for that.;) neh it's ok me too but then currently i am interested in their 'gay' life style hahahahaha not them but the stories on9 muahahahaha.;)
I love the crack thing~ Sweet Jin with his daughter Aiko~ Aiko reminds me of Hanayome to Papa~ *JunnO bias* Kame being strict is soo like Kame~ XDDD I try to understand your style of writing~ But this is a good start~
haha yes, he is a goooood father hahaha.:) yea the name is taken from there since it means beloved child in japanese.;)and both jin and kame love their child haha.:)
haha yea tats kame after all..u w3ill know why he is like that soon.;)
hah gomen too...because wen i was writing the story, mostly dialogues were conquering haha ..in coming chapters i will make it to be more narrative like.can't promise 1oo% but will try okey.:)
u REALLY THINK SO? hahah arigatou gozaimasu neh! i really appreciate it as this is my first time writing.:) btw i wil read ur kame is dead soon ok .right now i am reading sumthing else hehe.;) as soon as i finish that i will read urs.:)
crack is a genre, I think bcoz i found when they mention crack in their genre it means it has to be funny~ So your fanfic is funny~ ^^; did I make sense?
Really? Can't wait~
Dialogue is ok for me bcoz i rather read teh dialogue than the narrative one~ (bcoz i hate to read) But it is up to you~ Your style of writing is nothing to do with me~ Write with joyful ok?
That is ok~ Take ur time~ I mean to change the fanfic anywhere~ Too many errors when i re-read it again~ TOOO many~ Oh My English~ So poor~ You are better~
owh u find it funny? omg!!!! numix-chan u just boost myself to write more! tq SOOOOOOO MUCH! because this is my first time writing and i never thought ppl will like my writing ...was hoping tho ahahhaa.:) yes u did.:)
hahah tunggu yea akak.:) hahah
owh really? actly me too! it's like ur going through their life hahah.;) get me? well i'll see what i can do okey.;) haha i hope my story can interest u to read haha.;) not meaning to force u tho.;) haha yea sure tq numix-chan.)
HUH? change ur fanfic? why???? then can let me to read first??? onegaishimasu!!!!!:) aww dun say that...i'm sure urs will great.;) lol i also have to refer to dictionary.com at times to find words meanings haahhaa.;) it took me some time to even write the short first chapter hahahaa.:) so kita satu geng je.;) hahaha:)
owh really? u think this story is awesome???? tq :) * hehehehehee.....* owh u too? haha...yea....JIN LOVEEEEEEEEE Aiko hhaaha :) aww tq for ur comments :) lolx.yea jin is and alwiz do lol haha :) * Aiko;s name is taken from hanayome to papa actly haha :) JUNOO BIAS! ^^
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Sweet Jin with his daughter Aiko~
Aiko reminds me of Hanayome to Papa~
*JunnO bias*
Kame being strict is soo like Kame~
XDDD
I try to understand your style of writing~
But this is a good start~
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haha yes, he is a goooood father hahaha.:)
yea the name is taken from there since it means beloved child in japanese.;)and both jin and kame love their child haha.:)
haha yea tats kame after all..u w3ill know why he is like that soon.;)
hah gomen too...because wen i was writing the story, mostly dialogues were conquering haha ..in coming chapters i will make it to be more narrative like.can't promise 1oo% but will try okey.:)
u REALLY THINK SO? hahah arigatou gozaimasu neh! i really appreciate it as this is my first time writing.:) btw i wil read ur kame is dead soon ok .right now i am reading sumthing else hehe.;) as soon as i finish that i will read urs.:)
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So your fanfic is funny~
^^; did I make sense?
Really? Can't wait~
Dialogue is ok for me bcoz i rather read teh dialogue than the narrative one~ (bcoz i hate to read) But it is up to you~
Your style of writing is nothing to do with me~
Write with joyful ok?
That is ok~ Take ur time~ I mean to change the fanfic anywhere~
Too many errors when i re-read it again~ TOOO many~ Oh My English~ So poor~ You are better~
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hahah tunggu yea akak.:) hahah
owh really? actly me too! it's like ur going through their life hahah.;) get me? well i'll see what i can do okey.;) haha i hope my story can interest u to read haha.;) not meaning to force u tho.;) haha yea sure tq numix-chan.)
HUH? change ur fanfic? why???? then can let me to read first??? onegaishimasu!!!!!:) aww dun say that...i'm sure urs will great.;) lol i also have to refer to dictionary.com at times to find words meanings haahhaa.;) it took me some time to even write the short first chapter hahahaa.:) so kita satu geng je.;) hahaha:)
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um, i tried to understand but....
wait u got too many typing errors.
try doing spell checks.
great ideas though.
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well yea, i guess because of dialogs?
really? yea sure..tq.;)
hehe arigatou.:)
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