English Assessment Story

[nataku_kun]

This story is for my English Assessment. Please read. This is the final copy so any last minute critique are welcome =D I'll change it ASAP. Under cut~

Marionette by Claudia Fok

When the police arrived at the small, dark apartment, the blood splattered on the wall had already dried and the young, mutilated bodies lay untouched. The window was wide

Comments

[miawarui]

Tha's fucking beatuiful, man.

I love it!

[the_poosh]

*ahem*
FAILED TO MENTION THE EDITOR! >.<
Kidding, kidding.
You need to update your LJ more. Hopefully this will remind you that you have one.