Fic: The Return of John Smith

[nashmaveric]

Title: The Return of John Smith
Fandom Doctor Who/Torchwood
Pairing: Jack/Ianto clear but not the focus.
Summary: The second Doctor says 'no'.
Disclaimer: I didn't make them up. I wish I did but I didn't. I do get to play with them sometimes though, and I say 'play' because I don't get any money out of it so it cannot in any way be described as '

Comments

[snglesrvngfrend]

And so now, of course, you have to write oodles of chapters in this AU, episodes with our new Torchwood. Jack, Ianto, Gwen, Martha and John. (And if that means multiple opportunities for the Jack/Ianto/John smut, who am I to complain?)

I think this was great, and an awesome idea! Thanks for sharing it.

[karaokegal]

Interesting premise. There was something so very wrong with the way the whole Rose/Doctor2 ending played out. I like the way you kept this exactly as we saw it, until the moment he says No.

And of course in my mind, Jack will keep going for the Doctor until he gets him and Ianto will either have to go for the threesome or be left out.

[tiki_92090]

love it! the way it should've gone!

[singswithmicoff]

I liked this a lot. Very cute and much better ending than the real episodes. And mmm two Jacks

[vipersweb]

Really like this and I do hope you'll write more in this au... I would love to see how John works with Martha - especially given how he acknowledges the atrocious manner the Doctor treated her. Or how Ianto secretly runs everything and takes everyone in hand.