T e l l M E W h a t Y o u T h i n k

[nasasie]

I'm going to trick them, I'm going to trick them good, no one will be as tricked as them will be

Comments

[amikatana]

being evil, yes? XD

[nasasie]

well not me of course, but Tyranno (insert lj tag here, but I'm to lazy, so imagine it)

[amikatana]

yeah, that's what I meant...I'm bein incoherent again

[darkamber]

Funny story! Especially when it's revealed at the very end that the kids are in kindergarten. *LOL*

Why the lack of Capital letters and periods, though? A written piece always looks better with proper grammar & punctuation.

[nasasie]

heh, I was trying for that situation, I'm glad you got it =)

Tyranno NEVER utters other peoples names with Capital letters, it's a "I am the boss of you" thing

the way the grammar is written, is.. well supposed to be 'artisitic' o_ô
remember, she IS only a kindergarden kid, her tought patterns are bound to be a little.. 'flakey' XD

finally ENGLISH IS NOT MY NATIVE LANGUAGE, and I haven't got any education is the subject (worth mentioning atleast) either

as for punctuation.. well I forget to add dots, so there, a dot.
=)

[lin]

heeheehee thats funny XD

I like that it's just dialogue, and nothing else :) you dont really need anything to show your readers what the situation is, it all works perfectly like this :)

[nasasie]

o_O I think thats the greatest compliment I've ever gotten (from someone who'd actually knows what they're talking about) for something I've written

Thank You!