Blackbird

Oct 06, 2014 22:12


Title: Blackbird
Authors: narya86 & tetila
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres, Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres/OFC
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Woah. Still not ours. Damn it all, how did(n’t) that happen?
Summary: “What about that one standing at the bar, looking a bit lost? Tall, blond, with the nice ass and the freckles?” Dan followed her gaze unthinkingly, and ( Read more... )

other: fanfic, genre: angst, rating: nc-17, genre: erotica, genre: het, genre: au, pairing: daniel agger/fernando torres

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acrayonsmile October 6 2014, 22:07:28 UTC
The way you two write is just so beautiful. You painted their longing so well I could feel it. Fuck I could practically hear it when Dan started humming and I just, the tears and the want, I was in tears myself! I wanted to just shake some sense into the two of them.

And the end was so subtle I had to read it a couple times.

I love it so much. I'm so glad you two are writing. <3

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narya86 October 6 2014, 22:25:36 UTC
OH MY GOD and it's your birthday, isn't it?! Wasn't it? Yes no?

You'll get a proper reply when I'm not about to go oto bed, but HAPPY BIRTHDAY, pretend this is your present. :D

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acrayonsmile October 6 2014, 22:45:42 UTC
Yes in fact and this was the best present ever!!!! <3

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narya86 October 30 2014, 22:06:17 UTC
Okay wow I'm SORRY that took forever to get back to you. I hope you had a great birthday! ;) (Mine was two days after yours. ^^) Also, I don't even know if you know this, but I'm stalking you on Twitter. Random info time over.

I wanted to thank you for your first comment again, because we haven't posted anything in so long, but to come back and still have you guys here, and to hear this from you really means a whole lot to me. Especially considering that you're basically the reason I got into this fandom and pairing at all. So thank you. <3

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unmomentoxfavor October 7 2014, 02:47:41 UTC
i sooo missed you two! this is so beautiful i have tears in my eyes!!
absolutely perfect!

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tetila October 17 2014, 20:47:33 UTC
Awww, no crying allowed :D But I'm glad you liked it!!

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golden_slumber1 October 7 2014, 09:06:07 UTC
I have been so late to your fics before and now I'm delighted to be finally caught up with a new one. The tension, the bare longing between them was so beautifully executed, I'm honestly in awe of your writing. I hope you guys continue to write more stories.

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narya86 October 30 2014, 22:07:50 UTC
Well don't worry about that because I'm SUPER LATE with replying to all these wonderful comments. Ugh. At least it hasn't been a month yet, the one thing I can be proud of. ^^

Anyway, I'm really happy there are still new people reading all our old stuff! And leaving such heart-warming comments too. Thank you so much, dear, even though I didn't reply immediately, I remember that it brightened my day a lot. :)

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gingermad October 7 2014, 12:15:09 UTC
there are many words that is possible to use for describe the emotions that this story made me feeling. But particularly one: love. Pure, simple love.
thank you for that.

kiss

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tetila October 17 2014, 20:55:14 UTC
You are very, very welcome :) We started to write that on our way back from Liverpool/England and I guess we hat lots of love in our hearts after that experience :D

I'm really glad we managed to finally post it (2 years or something!).

Thank you for your comment! :)

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damianivs October 9 2014, 02:03:09 UTC
Just re-read your stories, and found there is a new one!:-D
Will come back with comment once finish it~~~

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damianivs October 9 2014, 04:21:39 UTC
Woooooooooow!
So they end up together again!!!
Sorry for Anna, but Dan/Nando are meant to be together!XD
Dan/Nando is my OTP, though I started with SerNando/ Gernando; these two are so fu*king hot together...
So happy you're back and please please write more more more~~~
Maybe a sequel to "I like you" or "Taking chances" or "The lives we lived last night "?
PS
I friended you, could you friend me back? Many thanks*hug*

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narya86 October 30 2014, 22:13:46 UTC
Weeeell, we deliberately left the ending open, because it appears this is something we like to do. *lol* So who knows, maybe Dan wasn't there to kiss and make up? ;)
Dan and Nando definitely are the hottest and sweetest together. I ship Fernando and Sergio in a bromance sort of way really hard, I just noticed recently that I always love writing Sergio in fics where he turns up. But I don't mind the occasional Gernando, though for me Steve and Xabi are eternal. ^^
No promises on any sequels, cause if we do post something more, it'll be something new we already wrote parts of. But I did friend you back. ;)

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