Alphabet (E, F)

Dec 29, 2011 20:05


Title: Alphabet (E, F)
Parts: A | B | C | D | G | H | I | J | K | L | M | N | O | P | Q | R | S | T | U | V | W | X | Y | Z
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: It sucks always having to come up with new ways to say how much they don't belong to me.
Summary: Part of the Alphabet Challenge.
A/N: They're both not very ( Read more... )

other: fanfic, genre: angst, story: alphabet challenge, genre: drama, genre: au, pairing: daniel agger/fernando torres, rating: pg-13

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marie16fh December 29 2011, 22:30:57 UTC
The first one makes me sad... :( But also it fills me with a sense of calm, is that weird? It just does.

Thank fuck you didn't kill Dan!!! I would've cried. It was very beautiful, I felt with Nando the entire time!

Loved them ♥

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narya86 January 5 2012, 10:13:05 UTC
I don't think it's weird - or maybe it is, but I felt entirely the same when I wrote it. So I know what you mean. :)

I know, I know, I just couldn't. ♥

Thank you, dear!

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narya86 January 5 2012, 10:16:57 UTC
You know, I hatehatehate fics where one of both die, but writing this didn't even feel that bad, because of what you said. *squishes them*

Aaww I'm sorry! I guess I found the right words then though. *hugs* I'm kind of relieved they found each other as well, but after E I couldn't kill either of them. ^^

Thank you for the comment. ♥ Hmm... no fluff next time, but maybe you'd like something on the smutty side? ;)

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thopix January 3 2012, 10:24:30 UTC
The first one was so sad but at the same time so full of love! I adored it!

In the second I was really heartbroken thinking that Dan was missing and maybe he'll be never found. I was so happy when they reunited!

Great job :D

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narya86 January 5 2012, 10:18:13 UTC
The first one is so strange in that way, right? Even though they're dying. I think that's why the second one was so much worse, because of the prospect that one of them would be left behind to deal with this horrible loss.

Thank you! :)

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tetila January 5 2012, 14:30:58 UTC
Somehow I always have to think about the time you read the to me on that ferry :D

'1 It's so sad :( Didn't we agree on 'nobody dies'? *tears in my eyes*

'2 When they were clinging to each other there in the wake of the destruction that was too much for heart or mind to put into words, the tears were coming again, wracking his body and washing away the dirt on his face. Only this time it wasn’t because his life had been taken, but given.

Such an emotional paragraph!

*more tears in my eyes*

♥ for you :D

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narya86 January 9 2012, 12:42:01 UTC
Me too, the reading on the ferry was awesome. :D

Well, we did, but... there are exceptions? At least there together even in the end. ♥

Thank you so much, sweetie. Always ♥ for you.

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vicky86x February 20 2012, 16:05:29 UTC
and again I have to apologize for being late, I guess you are used to it by now, but as promised, I'm going to read everything you post sooner or later! And I'm sorry it might take me so long by now, but this mainly because I need to be in the right mood to read these two, which sadly I'm not as often as I would like to be!

Anyway ;)

1. so, so sad! I really don't like any death-stories, but somehow the thought of them at least being together in the end makes it "bearable" (which really isn't the right word for a ficlet that I really enjoyed reading, but I guess you know what I mean :P)

2. is heartbreaking as well, even though it has a "happy end" but the emotions Fernando is going through, because he thinks he might have lost Dan break my heart! How he goes from being completely happy in one moment, to devastated just seconds after! I'm glad that they have each other in the end though, not sure if I'd be able to survive losing one of them twice ;)

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narya86 March 2 2012, 15:40:01 UTC
Oh you know me, you never have to apologise for that. :) I'm just glad you still read them at all when I/we post them.

1. I know, I hate death-stories on default, and there are only very very very few exceptions. But as you said, I think here it's the fact that they're together, no matter what, that made it okay to write.

2. Haha yes, funny thing that those two stories ended up being paired with each other. But I really couldn't kill Dan in this one, that would have fallen into the category of not okay for my own heart. ^^

Thanks again, dear. ♥

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