I started read this fic only two days ago and now I'm absolutely in love with it. I'm addicted too! All this nando's angst and his negation of his own feelings really made my suffer. But Dan is so flawless, half elf and half incubus! Where I can find one? And now, in the worst moment, the monster appears again. I hope Nando can kill it and they can solve their problems and live happily ever after. I can't wait to the next chapter!
Oh god oh god oh god. I had to wait to read this chapter 'cause on Sunday when you posted it, I was too knackered and had to sleep and when I got up Monday morning Lj wouldn't load and I've only just managed to get it to load. Sad sad story, yeah.
But omg! This chapter! It's short but the angsty, action packed content more than makes up for it. JFC but what's gonna go on from here? You've really managed to bring these last few chapters up to an amazing climax. Everything is all coming together and I have no idea how things are gonna end up. I feel like poor Fernando's head is going to explode if anymore gets loaded onto him all at once.
The saddest parts of this chapter were definitely when Fernando kept Dan out with the iron knife. The look you described on Dan's face! ;_; And then when Fernando found out about Nathan! My god, so freakin' unfair! :/
Really really cannot wait for the next chapter. So near the end! Want to know what happens. Love it!! :D
Aaww I'm glad you got around to reading it eventually!
You're right, Fernando probably feels like his head is exploding right now. Poor thing, it really came all at once (but I guess that's what makes a climax ^^). It's really, absolutely unfair, and our hearts actually bled when we "killed" Nate because we both grew to really like him. And, yeah, the knife scene... ouch.
The next chapter will probably be done by the time we return from our England trip. :)
I know, poor bb, we've really hit him with almost everything we could there. :( But, yeah, climax and all. And with him and Dan... well, yeah, they've kind of been together for a few weeks now, but Dan has lived for centuries. There's no way they could really know each other now. And, well, there's still the issue that there's a fundamental difference between them...
Anyway, the next chapter will most likely be ready by the time we return from England, so, yeah. :)
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCKKKKKKK. Dammit, I'd be crying hysterically too if I were Fernando. And what the fuck, my heart broke after he set up the barrier against Dan. My heart broke for the both of them.
Although it's a little short and it ends a little abruptly, it's still worth to wait for so long, cuz this chapter contains so much imformation, and it is so so dramatic, just like everything happened at the same time, and now Nando has to face the Agurauk, his deepest fear, when he is the most vulnerable, maybe now it's replaced by that damn Warden's death, but oh, poor nando, how could he deal with all of these? so many diffculties happened at the same time which he had to overcome, how could he face these things alone, without Dan? I'm really curious about what will happen next.
We did mention somewhere that the last three chapters would be shorter I think, because things really happen more quickly now. And Fernando really is being pushed right to the edge here. :( You'll get to see how he deals with it in the next chapter, should be ready by the time we're back from England. ^^
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All this nando's angst and his negation of his own feelings really made my suffer. But Dan is so flawless, half elf and half incubus! Where I can find one? And now, in the worst moment, the monster appears again. I hope Nando can kill it and they can solve their problems and live happily ever after.
I can't wait to the next chapter!
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Thank you for the comment and the next chapter will probably be done soon, maybe answering some of your questions :)
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But omg! This chapter! It's short but the angsty, action packed content more than makes up for it. JFC but what's gonna go on from here? You've really managed to bring these last few chapters up to an amazing climax. Everything is all coming together and I have no idea how things are gonna end up. I feel like poor Fernando's head is going to explode if anymore gets loaded onto him all at once.
The saddest parts of this chapter were definitely when Fernando kept Dan out with the iron knife. The look you described on Dan's face! ;_; And then when Fernando found out about Nathan! My god, so freakin' unfair! :/
Really really cannot wait for the next chapter. So near the end! Want to know what happens. Love it!! :D
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You're right, Fernando probably feels like his head is exploding right now. Poor thing, it really came all at once (but I guess that's what makes a climax ^^). It's really, absolutely unfair, and our hearts actually bled when we "killed" Nate because we both grew to really like him. And, yeah, the knife scene... ouch.
The next chapter will probably be done by the time we return from our England trip. :)
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Anyway, the next chapter will most likely be ready by the time we return from England, so, yeah. :)
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