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katiebooth1983 July 6 2011, 21:58:14 UTC
Humming lightly he started the engine of his car again, pulled out of the parking lot and onto the streets with the quietly fearful hope that, as strange as it sounded, when this weekend was over, his heart wouldn’t leave for Spain together with Fernando.

Oh Daniel! *hugs him*

This is gorgeous, i'm a little concerned at what will happen when Fernando leaves though. Both of them seem to be falling for each other.

Brilliant chapter.

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narya86 July 13 2011, 09:00:25 UTC
*pets Dan* It's definitely not an easy situation they're in, indeed a little like taking a leap without knowing what's below. But they'll see I guess. :)

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paperflowwer July 6 2011, 22:45:06 UTC
oh my god, that was so so so goddamn sweet :)

i loved the way they treat each other, how dan said this totally random things without thinking and my god, i can't find other words for this than cute, sweet, aaw and extremely fluffy, hihi <3

even if i normally don't like those fluffy stories, sometimes it's just what i need. and my god, this is just what i need :)

cannot wait to read the third chapter!

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narya86 July 13 2011, 09:01:33 UTC
Haha I told you! Syrupy. ;) And I totally agree, I'm so in love with Dan here it's ridiculous. It's definitely totally what I needed too at the time. *hugs*

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fefe5z5 July 6 2011, 23:15:57 UTC
Omg to freaking good Dan was so trying to impress fernando during his training, even though he doesn't really need too. Oh the insecurties going through that boys mind por Danny not having someone by his side. I hope Fernando changes that. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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narya86 July 13 2011, 09:06:01 UTC
I don't really think Dan actively tried to impress Fernando... it was more like a natural boost he got by his appearance. :D And it isn't that Dan really in insecure, per so, he just isn't in an easy situation overall.

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giocabello23 July 7 2011, 00:17:27 UTC
*Grinning like a fool*

Every girls dream...meeting the dreamy footballer of their desire on a getaway! ;)

The two of you never disappoint with any story you write. They just keep getting better! Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Dan's heart doesn't leave for Spain either.

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narya86 July 13 2011, 09:07:21 UTC
Haha yes, I bet that's the dream of a lot of girls. So we needed our Nando to live it. :D

Hehe thank you so much! It's always so encouraging to hear that people aren't getting bored with out stuff. ^^

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tetila July 13 2011, 08:49:35 UTC
You're welcome for the warm fuzzies :P

I'm really happy to hear everyone liked the coffee machine lines :)

Thanks for your comment!

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