Oh my god. Holy crap that was amazing. My heart was in my throat for most of that! You made my day posting this, honestly. The whole thing flowed beautifully.
I'm really glad to hear that you all didn't mind the change of pov to a girl in this. :D And you're right, she really is a sweetheart, and who knows where the boys would be without her help. And yes, she could have been in real danger as Dan pointed out. But I guess she trusted Dan enough just because she knew he was important to Fernando. And I really liked that scene too. :)
And I'm absolutely glad to hear you liked the endind as much as we do. :D You're very, very welcome. :)
OMG, Catalina is love. I'm usually not big on OFC, but she's excellent (er.... so far, unless she turns out to be psycho or something, but I'm not getting that drift).
Yay, the last scene was beautiful. I love this fic so much. <3
Well, I was not expecting Fernando to be that upset over what happened (*narrowing eyes in Dan's general direction*), poor boy.
My goodness I love Catalina's character in this chapter. Someone needed to intervene in Fernando and Dan's relationship because they were failing miserably at, well, everything concerning their situation.
“Oh god, he was the best night of my life, hands down. He did that thing with his fingers…" the girl trailed off in a fit of giggles, her friends joining in. And I have no idea how he did it, but I came so hard I was seeing stars, literally!" - Nice!
As for the chapter's ending: WOOHOO! They're together...now for the sex *waits patiently*
Really, you didn't? When the whole "castle in the air" he built for himself just crumbled away underneath him?
You're right, they desperately needed the intervention, so they really should be thankful that she was there. That's why sho got her own chapter, so to speak. :D
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And I'm absolutely glad to hear you liked the endind as much as we do. :D You're very, very welcome. :)
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Yay, the last scene was beautiful. I love this fic so much. <3
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That you love Catalina is actually one big compliment for us. It's not easy to develop an OFC that isn't the devil or a Mary Sue in slash.
And lol at the psycho thing, but you never know right? :P
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Where are you btw?
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My goodness I love Catalina's character in this chapter. Someone needed to intervene in Fernando and Dan's relationship because they were failing miserably at, well, everything concerning their situation.
“Oh god, he was the best night of my life, hands down. He did that thing with his fingers…" the girl trailed off in a fit of giggles, her friends joining in. And I have no idea how he did it, but I came so hard I was seeing stars, literally!" - Nice!
As for the chapter's ending:
WOOHOO! They're together...now for the sex *waits patiently*
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You're right, they desperately needed the intervention, so they really should be thankful that she was there. That's why sho got her own chapter, so to speak. :D
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