Marked

[narya86]

Title: Marked
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I don't know them so these are obviously imaginary counterparts.
Summary: He’d never been like this - or maybe he just hadn’t even known himself.
A/N: I don’t quite know where this came from, but a funny turnaround from my last ficlet. Thehe.

Comments

[vicky86x]

Dan marking Fernando is always a good thing ;)

I like Nandos train of thoughts, they seem a bit gloomy, but the last sentence made me smile :)

I always love when everything just seems to be about Dan and Nando, about their relationship and no one else matters &hearts

[narya86]

Hehe yeah, Fernando's pretty hooked on Dan here. ;) And me too, totally! Like, when there's absolutely nothing else for them. ^^ *love*

[littlesumo]

Oh wut?

You know this is scary because this could easily be Fernando's POV to something I am writing right now from Dan's POV. I am actually baffled. :)

Other than that, it's dark and angsty and great. :)

[narya86]

Omg what? O.o Shit, now I'm so damn curious. :D Can't wait to see it!!

And I'm glad you liked it. ♥

[littlesumo]

I cannot find the last sentence right now. And it became sappy in the end, so forget what I said :)

[narya86]

Aawww when will you post? :D

[paperflowwer]

aaw, dankeschön :-) ehrlich, sowas will ich jeden tag sehen, nachdem ich total kaputt und fertig mit der welt online komme ;)

das war einfach unheimlich, unheimlich sexy, die vorstellung von fernando auf dem tisch, seine gedanken - vor allem gegen ende was die teamkollegen angeht... uh uh uh. kontrolle verlieren mag er nicht, hihi, nur mit daniel :)
und dass er daniel's whore ist...hihi. und oh gott, ich hör jetzt auf zu kommentieren, mein gehirn ist ja nur brei...

mir gefällts auf jeden fall, wie immer :-)
liebe grüße!
kathi

[narya86]

Oh ja, das kann ich komplett nachvollziehen! Freut mich dass ich dir den Abend schöner machen konnte. :)

Thehe ja, irgendwie fand ich Exhibitionist!Fernando auch irgendwie sexy... hm. *lol* Man sollte ihm öfter mal nen naughty streak verpassen. :D

[marie16fh]

I really, really liked this!

Adore how he starts wondering if maybe he's a whore for loving the stares and the attention to his marks (fucking hot, btw), but then comes to the conclusion that he doesn't care, because he's only like that for one guy.

Woop! <3

[narya86]

I think that part is what appealed to me the most too, this exhibitionistic streak he has here but in the end would only ever really want Dan. :)

[tetila]

Happy and glorious,
Long to reign over us;
God save the Queen!

[tetila]

:P

Hmm where to begin when the brain is a puddle on the ground?

1. Rain was pouring against the window glass. Sharp pattering. Blurring the world outside. Great detail and it made the perfect image in my mind ♥

2. even as he let his forehead sink down onto the table with a soft, ecstatic sob and spread his legs just that little wider. Almost obscenely. asdfghjklkjhgfdgdhjskl! So good and woha HOT!

3. The last paragraph? Made me smile so hard, because D&F = ♥

[narya86]

1. Really glad you like this so much, I just put it in almost as an afterthought. :)

2. Interesting that this is what gets you going. *eg*

3. I agree whole-heartedly!

[narya86]

NOOOO why did you do that?! XD