Imperfection

[narya86]

Title: Imperfection
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I don't know them so these are obviously imaginary counterparts.
Summary: “Something’s wrong with you, has been for weeks. I just… I can’t figure out what.”
A/N: Not Dan how I usually write him, but I was in the mood. For zhi_shan who told me how much she loves him like

Comments

[paperflowwer]

Oh Gott... ich les den One-Shot hier so & denk mir: Irgendwoher kennst du das doch ;) Bis ich mal kapiert hab, dass ich den tatsächlich schon gelesen hat, hat's n Weilchen gedauert...

Aber ja - ich hab dir ja gesagt, dass ich ihn wirklich wunderwunderschön finde. Ich liebe es wie du Dan hier darstellst, auch wenn du ja schon sagtest, dass das sonst nicht so deine Art ist und Fernando ist einfach so unglaublich - zucker hier und das einzige Wort, was ich für den ganzen One-Shot habe ist eigentlich: Aaaw :)

Mein Herz hat sich an einigen Stellen - gerade mit Dans Unsicherheit - ziemlich zusammengezogen und ich dachte nur: "Oh Gott, Fernando, sag jetzt bloß nichts falsches..." aber aaaaw! Ich liebe es. Ehrlich. Alles :-)

Liebe Grüße an dich & nen schönen Abend dir noch!
Kaathi :)

[narya86]

LOL das hätt ich gern gesehen. ^^

Ich hab damals das Lied aus dem Lied und bei der einen Zeile hat's irgendwie Klick gemacht und das ganze Ding war da, also musste's wohl irgendwie raus. ;)

Aaww du bist süß. :D Aber freut mich dass es dich so mitgenommen hat. ♥

(Btw, wo hast du gestern Abend eigentlich gesteckt? ^^)

[chocoholic_81]

Wow! I truly like Zhi Shan's Dan.
You took him with all his insecurities - and showed him from Nando's perspective.
I love it, love how Nando reassures him...
And that last line - just wonderful <3

[narya86]

I like him a lot too, but I usually prefer to write him a bit differently. ;) But the idea was there so I figured I should give it a try.

Glad you do, and thanks a lot for the comment. :)

[katiebooth1983]

I adore insecure, vunerable Dan. I actually got tears in my eyes reading this.

♥

[narya86]

Aaww! *gives out a tissue* :)

[nandolove28]

Oh wow... this was precious.

Poor Fernando, having to deal with not knowing what was wrong with Dan. Worrying about this and that and never really being able to figure it out.

Poor Danny, thinking he wasn't good enough. Thinking Fernando thought the same thing and was going to leave him. That's so heartbreaking.

I am glad Fernando said something to him. Gosh, that must have been awful to hear. Glad Danny listened to what Fernando had to say. That was important and good to get in the open. I hope that helped Danny gain some confidence in himself.

Great job, honey! Loved it!

[narya86]

You're right, I really don't want to imagine how hearing something like this must feel. And, well, he was pretty shocked. And I'd think that it definitely helped Dan a whole lot. :)

[kiaretta985]

wow, I really, really liked this! Poor Danny, it had to be very bad to carry all his insecurities... and Nando with a few words (but the right ones!) took all his doubts away :)

[narya86]

I guess sometimes that just happens, to carry something like this around, even this in this case it was a pretty big something. And I'm glad to hear that what Fernando said seemed realistically convincing. :D