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Fic: Treehouses and Hot Chocolate

Aug 29, 2011 12:30

Howdy again. I bring another fic inspired by the kink meme; enjoy!

Title: Treehouses and Hot Chocolate
Pairing: Miles / Phoenix
Rating: R / NC-17
Spoilers: Ever-so-slight for Justice For All
Word Count: ~9000 (Longish one-shot)
Summary: Memories of their first kiss as children lead Phoenix and Miles to try taking things further.

( Treehouses and Hot Chocolate )

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Comments 18

xploded_tb August 29 2011, 18:35:33 UTC

Alone in Germany, with nothing but my imagination and the memory of your kiss and the guilt for sullying such an innocent moment with the urges of puberty.

For some reason, this is the sexiest line ever in all MitsuNaru fics I've read. And omg you're the rare few who has it mitsunaru!

Thanks for the awesome read. Good porn indeed. ;D

selenity136 August 29 2011, 19:33:26 UTC

Amen to that!

prospectkiss August 30 2011, 21:47:31 UTC

Thank you! :)

xploded_tb August 30 2011, 03:20:45 UTC

Passerby!Anon concurs. That line was hot and heartbreaking all in one.

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verloren1983 August 30 2011, 07:23:26 UTC

Larry would SO do that. All of it. He was so freaking spot on that I had the same reaction to him here that I do in the games (alternating between laughing at him and headdesking really, really hard). XD

Very nicely done. And not just the Larry bits. :D

prospectkiss August 30 2011, 21:52:30 UTC

Thank you muchly! I wanted to try my hand at some of the other characters in the games, and I'm happy that Larry seemed to come out right. He's a fun character, so lovable and exasperating.

mmmmnnn i dun wanna do anythinggg... pingback_bot August 30 2011, 07:37:18 UTC

User xploded_tb referenced to your post from mmmmnnn i dun wanna do anythinggg... saying: [...] memory of your kiss and the guilt for sullying such an innocent moment with the urges of puberty. [...]

eumiharun August 30 2011, 10:51:40 UTC

Love this. Thanks to xploded_tb, I had read my first MItsuNaru fics. XD

prospectkiss August 30 2011, 21:54:24 UTC

Thank you very much! I fell in love with the games a few months ago and have been reading as many P/E fics as I could find. This is such a talented community!

occipitallobe August 30 2011, 13:59:41 UTC

*smirks* nice.

I admit, this is the first Phoenix/ Edgeworth fic I have read (also first Ace Attorney fic in general) and I am definitely going to look into more.

Phoenix seemed very well developed and -as everyone else has mentioned- Larry was a nice touch.

prospectkiss August 30 2011, 22:00:13 UTC

Thank you! It's very fun to write from Phoenix's point of view (though I may challenge myself and write from Edgeworth's viewpoint next time), and Larry's just a treat to do as well.

And also, I'm happy this fic got to introduce you to the fandom. There are many wonderful P/E and general Ace Attorney fics out there, and I hope you enjoy them as well.