Hibernation - Chapter 1

[narcoticblue]

Title: Hibernation (Chapter 1/?)
Author: narcoticblue 
Fandom: alice nine.
Pairing(s): Tora/Saga
Rating: PG-13 for language, implications of M/M
Genre: angst, hurt/comfort, schmoop
Warnings: Pet death, but it isn’t the subject of the story.
Disclaimer: Do not own anything or anyone. :(
Summary: Saga doesn't speak at all when he takes the call, just stares at his feet

Comments

[erikaoi]

nice start.tow i don’t see the relation with the title.i guess i have to follow the story

[narcoticblue]

Thank you for reading! :D

Oh~! The relation was so clear in my head that I didn't realize readers wouldn't see it. Well, it's going to become clear in a later chapter, so do feel free to follow. ;)

[erikaoi]

hahaha i guess i'll just stick around but dun make it hard to understand okay?

[rheakurokawa]

This was wonderful. Really really wondeful. It's been a while since i read them, but this was great. Very quiet, very nice and slow and full of ache and natural emotions, from tora's protectiveness to saga's hurt and in return tora's hurt too. it's full of that. it feels real and natural

[rheakurokawa]

umm, where do i press to memorize this?

[narcoticblue]

Thank you! ♥ For reading and for the lovely comment. It's been a while since I've read/written them too, so I was afraid they'd come off as a bit OOC (that is, if they do have a certain characterization)... I'm confusing myself. :P

Above the title, there's a link-button thing for Memories. :)

Thank you again.

[rheakurokawa]

thanks. it was good. truly :) hope you'll write more of them. :)

[silveryxdark]

Ahh ♥ That was very, very lovely. I really liked it, and it was saddening but aww Tora is so sweet and supportive.

[narcoticblue]

Awww, thank you for reading and commenting. And a really nice comment, at that. X)

Things will be sad for a while, but they'll get better. :3

[paranoiascreams]

Saga's Tora's beloved everything

I love this line. so sweet.

This is wonderfully written and i can feel the protectiveness tora's giving saga in silence, he doesnt say anything, he doesnt talk, he just makes up for the actions he give Saga that he's there for him.

thanks for sharing, i will wait for the next chapters. ^_^

[narcoticblue]

What a lovely comment. >w< Thank you!

Yeah, the silent, supportive partner is my image of Tora. Actually, my image of a good partner, anyhow.

Hee, thanks. ♥

[g0g0_lolitz]

i love the silence in it.

[narcoticblue]

Must be that I'm bad at dialogue... XD

Thank you for reading!