Comments | naol: Disaster Relief, part three

naol

Disaster Relief, part three

Feb 21, 2008 19:46

No actual smut in this part, just some UST. Illyria is a cast iron bitch to write, you know that? I'm sure I forced the tone a bit too much in a couple of places. Oh well. It's been two weeks now. This is as good as I can make it without seeing it actually posted. It's also where we start to get hints of something else going on in the background. ( Read more... )

fic: disaster relief, pairing: giles/willow, btvs: spike, pairing: buffy/xander, btvs: buffy, pairing: slash, pairing: faith/willow, btvs: xander, pairing: giles/faith, btvs: giles, btvs: illyria, pairing: threesome, btvs: other, pairing: other, btvs: faith, pairing: faith/xander, btvs: angel, btvs: dawn, btvs: willow, pairing: dawn/xander, rating: nsfw, pairing: wtf!?, fanfiction, pairing: willow/xander

Comments 8

deird1 February 21 2008, 21:39:36 UTC

Well done!

Lines I really liked:
there were still limits no sane individual would dare to cross
but Dawn was hardly that far gone that she could hump something out of a Lovecraft novel. At least she really hoped not.
Part of the Scooby gang with Giles and Xander and Wuh... the other one.
he walked around with his hair in a top knot for weeks and wouldn't stop calling Giles 'Master'."
And as far as emotional cues went, Illyria had hesitated before saying his name.
Dawn just smirked. "Well in Spike's case, that might actually be a turn on."
Please Lord, let him be haunted by a dead corgi in the toilet!
certain that no one was abusing anyone else tonight. Well, not without their partner's consent, anyway.
Mrs Larrity in Sex Ed hadn't managed to make it sound quite so disturbing.

Very intrigued by what's going to happen with Dawn and Illyria.
And I really want to know what's happening in the empty room.

naol February 21 2008, 22:12:31 UTC

Thanks for reading :)

I'm glad you liked it. As far as Dawn and Illyria go, things should start to get quite interesting soon enough. I'm more worried about what's going on with Andrew, Angel and Spike. There are some things so gruesome that no sane man can imagine their horror! *makes expressive gestures of doom*

mymatedave February 21 2008, 23:16:22 UTC

this is brilliant as always, the characters all sound true to life, and the band name of 'Rabid Zombie Skull F*ckers' is sublime. I shall now end this cringingly positive reply.

naol February 22 2008, 10:34:35 UTC

Glad you had fun with it. Thanks for the positiveness :)

angelsrebellion February 22 2008, 06:06:37 UTC

Okay, the Xander/Buffy kind of makes me cringe for some reason. I dunno, maybe it reminds me of a brother/sister thing lol. I liked Dawn and Illyria's conversation, you did a good job with Illyria's dialogue. And I'm looking forward to the Giles/Faith!

Okay, so now I have a request or two >.>
1)Would LOVE a Spike/Angel/Xander threesome (God so yummy)
2)Either a Buffy/Spike or a Buffy/Angel either is delicious. Oh or maybe a Spike/Buffy/Angel? (Hey, I have a thing for yummy threesomes ^^)

naol February 22 2008, 10:33:29 UTC

Ooh! That could actually be quite fun. I had wondered about doing some S/B/A at some point, just for the heck of it, but if I also do some S/X/A then I could have a rather hilarious 'jealousy' scene later *grins*

jarald February 22 2008, 20:57:28 UTC

That was fun. I'm definately looking forward to more. I liked your Illyria voice, by the way.

I wouldn't mind seeing some Xander & Dawn interaction later - doesn't even have to be anything naughty. Awkward conversations are good too. ^_^

naol February 25 2008, 09:24:14 UTC

Oh, there are definitely some Dawn & Xander moments to come *grins*

And thanks. I was very worried about Illyria for some reason. She's just hard to write for me, I think.