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Fic: When Play Turns Bitter - Chapter 13: "(I'm Going To) Stop Pretending I Didn't Break Your Heart"

May 16, 2011 09:51

TITLE: "When Play Turns Bitter - Chapter Thirteen: (I'm Going To) Stop Pretending I Didn't Break Your Heart"
AUTHOR: nanoochka
RATING: NC-17 for language, violence and graphic descriptions of sex.
PAIRING: Dean/Castiel, Dean/OMC, Sam/OFC, mentions of Dean/Lisa and Cas/Balthazar
SUMMARY: “You’re happy with your world/ But there is something small in the ( Read more... )

dean/omc, dean/castiel, when play turns bitter, wip, nc-17, season 6, fic, spn

Comments 63

nollie86 May 16 2011, 13:59:02 UTC

Haven't read yet, just found it but YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!! I've been waiting for this :D

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nanoochka May 17 2011, 14:05:02 UTC

On the one hand, I'm sorry I kept you up. On the other hand, I hope you had some pleasant dreams! Thanks for reading!

Okay, I finished! nollie86 May 16 2011, 16:28:20 UTC

After reading and letting it soak in for awhile, I'm back. Haha. This story, man, this *story*. The things it does to me.

Or at least part of it, since there probably wasn’t much else that could drive Dean to taking to the streets of Portland wearing only jeans and a pair of aviators.

That image made me laugh. Just the thought of Dean cruising topless, :P.

Cas wasn’t some fucking shore calling him back-he was the goddamned moon.

You're just amazing, and I'm always finding lines like this in your writings that just *sing*. And your character Kurt is FABULOUS! Most of the time, peoples OC's leave me cringing at some point or another, but you've got him smooth as silk. :)

Re: Okay, I finished! nanoochka May 17 2011, 15:58:53 UTC

Aw, thank you! Kurt is definitely my baby, and I know there are plenty of folks who don't like him on principle, but I'm especially glad for those who have enjoyed reading him. I agree that OMCs are hard to do well, so it means a lot for you to say that! <3

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nanoochka May 17 2011, 15:59:28 UTC

Thanks, sweetheart. I think I'm going to do lots of crying when the last chapter is done and posted. *wibbles*

scyllaya May 16 2011, 17:34:29 UTC

Awww, hope there is hope now. So happy. Poor Dean at first, but now we can have hope again. Great chapter :)

nanoochka May 17 2011, 16:01:42 UTC

Thank you! I know a lot of you must have thought happy times would never come again. :P