Fanfic: Hands on Experience Chapter 7: Misconceptions Part 2
Title: Hands on experience. Chapter 7: Misconceptions Part 2
Pairing: SeiferxZell
Rating: NC-17.
Warning: Nudity, threat of violence, actual violence and…sex, yes there’s also sex in here. Didn’t think that you’d be surprised. You know, swearing should have been in the warning from day one. I have a potty mouth ( Read more... )
Pairing: SeiferxZell
Rating: NC-17.
Warning: Nudity, threat of violence, actual violence and…sex, yes there’s also sex in here. Didn’t think that you’d be surprised. You know, swearing should have been in the warning from day one. I have a potty mouth ( Read more... )
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I love how Seifer and Zell seem to be getting more personal and more involved, even though Zell hates it. Also, love love love that Seifer entrusted Zell with his necklace/choker thing. Very deep.
Poor Lou! I felt like there was a deeper plot going on there with him. Almost like Garden's up to something. :O
Can't wait for the next bit! :]
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Oh, Lou. I need to introduce some ideas and he's the guinea pig. Besides, It's not like Balamb Garden has some gigantic investor that manipulates the school to get his way. Oh, no.
We have one more misconception to get through.
Part 1: Seifer thinks Zell is a masochist.
Part 2: Seifer doesn't get that yes, he does push way too hard.
Part 3: ?
And then Profit happens.
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I literally want to hug Lou and be like, "it's okay! bad stuff happens so better stuff can happen!" and give him cookies. I do hope you have good stuff ahead for him. He's one of the few original characters I've encountered that I like. Your characterization was awesome. He's not some random name thrown in for us to accept, and he's not just tagging along for the hell of it. He actually means something to us.
Dun dun duuuun. Super excited!
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His drama is an added overflow from AHC since i'm currently stuck between both...umm mentalities.
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How to describe my feelings about Seifer and Zell's relationship....Can't! I just love how it is slowly moving forward and slowly moving more...emotional. :-) And remains so delightfully hot!
Poor Lou...oh, I wonder what those two are *really* after....
Yay! *hug*
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Yeah, I wouldn't have been able to pull off 'Seifer is less than an half an inch from Zell's face' if I didn't go through all of the past chapters. Yes, I've kept it hot. And I still have a bag of tricks you haven't even seen yet.
It's no coincidence that I've gone through hundreds of pages and only had one penetration. It's about mixing it up in frustratingly fun ways.
What? Lou's being groomed, it's educational and psyche-damaging but that only helps the lessons sink in more.
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Poor Seify doesn't know how deep in the end he really is and Zell is just plain pat-able. You have this amazing ability to make the most lurid acts totally fun. Loved the cum stains (I reckon Zell should switch to free Seifer-gel milked fresh from.....).
The scene with Seifer tying Zell's shoes was totally cute. Shame on Zell for not cooing when Seifer did that. I'm still curious about Zell's hand(s) and how Seifer is gonna make it better (a kiss will not suffice).
Seifer seems somewhat reasonable in this chapter and that only spells drama. I have no idea what you plan to do with Lou but knowing you it's something devious:D
Thankyou for posting a chapter so soon...you made my day. I pray that you continue to post in the future (make that very near future). I adore your writing style and your fresh take on Seifer and Zell's relationship (we all knew they were screwing each other senseless in the game).
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It's just sex, right? Why would Seifer worry about that? It's not like he's been getting a little crazy. *cough
Oh, you'll have to wait and see on that hand. It'll be a doozy.
Of course, Seifer's reasonable. He getting his way and he finally finished getting laid. Well, he finally had a decent orgasm, at the very least. Let's see how long that keeps up.
With Lou, well, time will tell. He's being developed.
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blah blah bllah blah blah?
oh, know, eyem taw king in jib brish. this chap ter left me in a pile of goo.
the silver choker/necklace is lovely. lots of trust between the two in that action.
Lou. poor guy :(
i wonder what else seifer is going to misconceive?
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You'll have to wait and see what will be misconceived.
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but oh my, what will he reveal? it had better be nothing... >:E
god i love seifer and zell as a couple. no, really. i don't know when i started shipping them, but i have for as long as i can remember. they're just so....well, is good the right word? they're just so right for each other. yeah i dunno, i guess this all comes back to that notion that we're all just making up seifer coz we don't know him as well as zell.
yeah i love you too
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I'd go for tasty, Seifer/Zell is tasty and delicious.
Loves ya back.
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