HAND ME NOW!!
anonymous
November 30 2009, 04:54:40 UTC
You have such a hot way of writing slash. Im dying to know how you'll resolve Zell's screwed up hand(s). Zell should so do some fisting to show little Seify how much of a pain he is up the a**. Please continue (like in the next hour if possible, though highly unlikely).
Re: HAND ME NOW!!nanirisficNovember 30 2009, 05:33:08 UTC
Thank you for the comment, little anonymouse. It is just the one hand that's messed up, left side, same as the tat. (I tell you, easiest way to remember where things are.) I have plans of course, many many plans for that hand.
Zell will continue to be a bratty demanding little bottom for a while longer if Seifer doesn't break him in first. If Seifer practiced a little orgasm denial every once in a while, he probably wouldn't have spoiled Zell rotten.
Of course, that's only one interpretation.
I am now writing completely genficariffic Left 4 Dead fic, so sorry, no miraculous chapter is gonna pop up in the next hour. I take turns with my very separate and different audiences. I only know one person that reads both and she was my roommate.
Anyway yes, try back next week whenever and if ever you read this comment.
soooo much better than actual porn lol GOD these two are so hot...AND IN LOVE AMIRITE!! i'm just so glad zell finally had the chance to tell seifer how he feels (kind of) and seifer finaly gets what he wants (kinda). it's all coming together!
p.s “Yeah, you wouldn’t believe the things he’s anal about.” possibly the best thing that's EVER happened to me XD
Well, if porn had a narrator to explain the inner turmoil and motivations of its participants then it be a bit deeper too. Or artsy-fartsy presumptious.
Or did you mean it's sexier because I thumb-up you if that's what you meant either way.
Well, Zell loves getting off and Seifer loves the power trips he gets, but in love? That's gonna take a while to even admit. Though I think everyone can agree that it is more than a series of one-night-stands at this point.
'Kind of' is the stage they're at. So if tensions and tempers boil it can still crumble away.
Wow...okay that was really hot...but it was also incredibly sweet and romantic in a weird kind of way!
I'm just imagining these two together and just unable to keep their hands off each other...one thinking he's just using the other and the other thinking he's being used...but getting more and more entangled.
*hugs the boys*
Poor Lou, though...hope he gets a big reward by the end of all this after the torture you're putting him through!
And darn that Seifer! Getting Zell's mom involved? That's not just dirty fighting, that's downright mean!
Hot, sweet, romantic, weird. Hit all the points I was going for.
It is a test of will, as you'll see in the next chapter in which we follow Seifer during those six days and then delve into the seventh or day one of the roadtrip.
Lou has a role to play, as a catalyst, even if he would rather not. He did run into Seifer very often in those narrow and hidden corridors.
lovely. i don't know what to do. it's so hot and bothering that I can't even describe what i'm feeling. HOT AND BOTHERED. the zell and seifer in my head are SO HOT AND BOTHERED :OOOO
erhm.
yes. what will happen. i want to know. hopefully you're writing now? i was postponing reading this cause i know you're switching between l4d.... and this.... sooooooooooooo commmonnnnn :( we're all waiting. i think.
Lol! I'm totally looking forward to the day then :) maybe i'll even read from the beginning again just to get the feel ;)
:O probably every incarnation of the two are actually really hot and bothered... just don't know how to express the... bothered...ness...? XD of the feelings ;)
-- like i said. it's almost impossible to describe. :o
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Zell will continue to be a bratty demanding little bottom for a while longer if Seifer doesn't break him in first. If Seifer practiced a little orgasm denial every once in a while, he probably wouldn't have spoiled Zell rotten.
Of course, that's only one interpretation.
I am now writing completely genficariffic Left 4 Dead fic, so sorry, no miraculous chapter is gonna pop up in the next hour. I take turns with my very separate and different audiences. I only know one person that reads both and she was my roommate.
Anyway yes, try back next week whenever and if ever you read this comment.
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GOD these two are so hot...AND IN LOVE AMIRITE!!
i'm just so glad zell finally had the chance to tell seifer how he feels (kind of) and seifer finaly gets what he wants (kinda). it's all coming together!
p.s
“Yeah, you wouldn’t believe the things he’s anal about.”
possibly the best thing that's EVER happened to me XD
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Or did you mean it's sexier because I thumb-up you if that's what you meant either way.
Well, Zell loves getting off and Seifer loves the power trips he gets, but in love? That's gonna take a while to even admit. Though I think everyone can agree that it is more than a series of one-night-stands at this point.
'Kind of' is the stage they're at. So if tensions and tempers boil it can still crumble away.
Glad you like that line.
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I'm just imagining these two together and just unable to keep their hands off each other...one thinking he's just using the other and the other thinking he's being used...but getting more and more entangled.
*hugs the boys*
Poor Lou, though...hope he gets a big reward by the end of all this after the torture you're putting him through!
And darn that Seifer! Getting Zell's mom involved? That's not just dirty fighting, that's downright mean!
More please. *grin*
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Hot, sweet, romantic, weird. Hit all the points I was going for.
It is a test of will, as you'll see in the next chapter in which we follow Seifer during those six days and then delve into the seventh or day one of the roadtrip.
Lou has a role to play, as a catalyst, even if he would rather not. He did run into Seifer very often in those narrow and hidden corridors.
More is in the works.
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erhm.
yes. what will happen. i want to know. hopefully you're writing now? i was postponing reading this cause i know you're switching between l4d.... and this.... sooooooooooooo commmonnnnn :( we're all waiting. i think.
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This friday looks like a good enough deadline.
I will not rest till every incarnation of Seifer and Zell are hot and bothered. Woot!
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:O probably every incarnation of the two are actually really hot and bothered... just don't know how to express the... bothered...ness...? XD of the feelings ;)
-- like i said. it's almost impossible to describe. :o
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