First Meeting

[nancygrew]

Title: First Meeting
Author: nancygrew
Rating:G
Notes: Written for Lure_ATWT for Fill in the BLanks Tuesday. Takes place late January 2010.
Disclaimer: characters belong to atwt
Summary: Reid and Luke meet in person for the first time

Comments

[sleeper6]

Opie! "Pretty"! Ha, I love reading Reid's thoughts.

Bravo! This is brilliant!

[nancygrew]

Thank you! Reid's thoughts are so much fun to write so I tend to do a lot more of Reid POV than Luke POV.

[ltklo]

Yes! Exactly! I think that Luke was not at all what Reid expected. Opie Taylor :)

[nancygrew]

Thanks! I wonder if the writers were trying to make Luke look as young as possible. We should probably be glad he wasn't wearing one of the striped shirts.

[nancygrew]

Thanks!!

[petuniagirl]

a kid with floppy blond hair and a shirt from K-martLOL. I'm sure that's exactly what Luke looked like to Reid and I can totally see that ticking him off.

So well done. I found it interesting that Reid immediately started wondering about what kind of relationship Noah and Luke had. Oh Reid, you're already being reeled in and you don't even know it.

[nancygrew]

Thanks very much. It is pretty interesting that almost all of the interactions between Noah and Luke that Reid witnesses are pretty indicative of them having a horrible relationship.

[kccalgal]

You have an uncanny ability to nail the scene every time with humor.

"Reid had been expecting a wealthy businessman with slicked back hair and a fancy suit. Or a spoiled playboy with an open shirt and gold chains. Instead, there was a kid with floppy blond hair and a shirt from K-mart standing there. Reid had been infuriated when he found himself being toyed with by a Machiavellian socialite. Now that he knew he was being blackmailed by Opie Taylor? Man, was he pissed!"

This paragraph made my morning! Great work.

[nancygrew]

Thanks very much! Reid certainly attracts a wide range of nemeses: Opie, Hank, Doogie, Kim.