Title: Names
Author:
nancybrownCharacters: Jack, Eleven, Amy
Rating: PG
Words: 2600
Summary: The man without a name, the Doctor who can't cure anyone, and the fairy tale princess meet, but not for the first time.
AN: Written for
queenfanfiction. Unbetaed. Technically takes place ten minutes after the end of a different story.
AN2: QFF wrote a lovely Sherlock AU called
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I really like the attention you show toward filling in the (vast!) blank spaces in Jack's life story. You do a lovely job showing the weight of all that time, in both directions, while at the same time not going too far and ending up in unbearable-emo-land. (Doctor-kissing helps, of course! He's older, sadder, maybe wiser, but he is still Jack, isn't he ^___^)
I think your stories are the best approach I've seen to tackling the utter giganticness of the idea of Jack actually living for millions of years. It's an impossible thing, but you write it wonderfully. Thank you.
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And this:
like someone's grandfather trying to be cool and failing
Best description of Eleven ever. :)
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Your Jack is always so angsty, heartbreakingly so, which is oh-so-nice of a change from everyone's I'll-fuck-everything-because-I-have-no-soul take on him, and LOL at Amy taking many many leafs out of his book. And, and, and, oh Eleven, I want to smish you FOREVER. Preferably with Jack. XD
Again, YOU ARE THE BEST SEKKRIT FIANCE IN THE UNIVERSE AND I THINK IF WE WERE EVER IN THE SAME ROOM TOGETHER I MIGHT HAVE TO KISS YOU. <33
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I have been working on this crazy theory that makes me happy. Everyone says River is Jack, but she's not, she's much more of the type to make a brilliant yet convoluted plan to get from Point A to Point B she would so steal a dinosaur and a forklift to accomplish her goal and see nothing wrong with this because it needed done. Whereas Amy looks at life like a smorgasbord of entertainment, and she spent years waiting for the Doctor to come back, and the Doctor is attracted to her but is mostly "Put on some pants and stop kissing me, 'kay?" and Amy is so very Jack.
Okay. Rambling done.
Eleven can always use more smishing. Also, cheek-pinching. 'Cause he's so damn cute.
I AM TWO HOURS AWAY FROM YOU AND I HAVE A CAR. IT CAN BE ARRANGED. (Just saying.)
:D
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Knowing that he'll run into the Doctor, over and over through all that time has to be some sort of comfort.
And yes, at some time Jack will be MUCH older than the Doctor.
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This was lovely, but with a sad thread running through it :)
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