That scene with Frank is so moving. I really love the details of the cups of tea and sitting in the hall.
I really love how Bonnie is a chip off the old block, and it's clever the way you've written that scene with the governor, Bonnie can easily hear her as talking to Frank, not Jack. I just love the way Jack's kids and grandkids are just so like him.
Stupidly grand gestures made for the sake of love ought to have something nice to recollect them by.
Okay, heavy duty mushmelon influence here, still...that's the bestest thing you've ever writ Torchwood. You got a real nice balance on the confusing insane family tree of Jack Harkness. His is more a venn diagram innit? Love your story becos you surprize me and that's always of the good in a reading.
Okay, ugly fact or just how it is about me--I always read the last paragraph of a book I'm going to read. Just do and then sometimes I wonder where the story will go and sometimes I guess correctly. With your stories, I'd be surprized ever time, my compliments to the 'chef'! ;-D
Being around Jack makes Frank want to shoot things. Fortunately, there was an opportunity. ;)
They aren't really the talking-their-feelings-out type of couple. They're the fight-through-seas-of-enemies-to-get-back-to-your-side type. I can work with that. :D
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I really love how Bonnie is a chip off the old block, and it's clever the way you've written that scene with the governor, Bonnie can easily hear her as talking to Frank, not Jack. I just love the way Jack's kids and grandkids are just so like him.
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Okay, heavy duty mushmelon influence here, still...that's the bestest thing you've ever writ Torchwood. You got a real nice balance on the confusing insane family tree of Jack Harkness. His is more a venn diagram innit? Love your story becos you surprize me and that's always of the good in a reading.
Okay, ugly fact or just how it is about me--I always read the last paragraph of a book I'm going to read. Just do and then sometimes I wonder where the story will go and sometimes I guess correctly. With your stories, I'd be surprized ever time, my compliments to the 'chef'! ;-D
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LOL
Oh, Frank. At least he got to be awesome one more time.
And at least Jack called Ianto to check in.
Well, the world has been saved (twice!), but they're still fugitives. How are they going to get out of this one?
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Jack's going to be checking up on Ianto A LOT in the near future.
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And Jack and Ianto are still annoying the crap out of me with their utter inability to talk about things. Boyz!
What is John Hart going to do?
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They aren't really the talking-their-feelings-out type of couple. They're the fight-through-seas-of-enemies-to-get-back-to-your-side type. I can work with that. :D
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