I really liked all three. It feels like you could put them all together, with #3 as the first part, & ... it doesn't really matter where you put #1. Very well done.
You make me fall even more in love with Kyouya's character. I absolutely adore the third one because of Yumi and their acceptance of how their world works. But Kyouya in #2 was just perfect.
funny, but I thought 1,2 were in the same story...they read like there are in the same 'verse. So 3 feels out of place to me... In the first few sentences of three, I though Yumi was a family member of Kyoya's, just with the way he spoke to her and seemed to really care for her.
I loved 1 & 2. I could really see this...and *sniff* poor kyoya!!!
Sorry for not getting to you sooner!namistai8April 26 2007, 22:00:00 UTC
Poor Kyouya indeed! I always make him so angsty. And yes, I like Yumi, which is why Kyouya would like her. I didn't know how to highlight the fact that they were engaged to be married, but this time Kyouya actually liked his new fiancee, despite it all.
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I think you'd also enjoy this: A Biography of Oohtori Kyouya, Chapter 3
But maybe that's just me ;)
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Hehehe. Tingly!
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*gives you a carrot*
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It's more about how Kyouya would have reacted. At least in my head.
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You make me fall even more in love with Kyouya's character. I absolutely adore the third one because of Yumi and their acceptance of how their world works. But Kyouya in #2 was just perfect.
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Kyouya deserves love too. Unfortunately, I am still to actually write that Kyouya gets the girl.
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I loved 1 & 2. I could really see this...and *sniff* poor kyoya!!!
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