[Pangaia] somewhere in the Olfridulfr complex . . .

[named_by_rhyme]

Title: nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition! the doorman
'Verse/characters: Pangaia; Dutch and Yasha
Prompt: 53B "lust"
Word Count: 720
Notes: So zero_pixel_coun handed me "skinned knuckles", and klgaffney wanted Yasha. Apparently this means I needed to write in someone else's universe. Go figure!

Comments

[billradish]

"Funny thing about magis training--they forget they have noses, too."

BWAHAHAHA. <3

Yasha blinked. Blinked again, re-running the calculations that led to "You punched a magis in the face."

"And the ears. And the kidneys. And the ribs." Dutch looked . . kind of smug, for a doorman. "Oh, and that diaphragm shot was good--he choked on 26.45% of a word."

Please to be continuing the raucous laughter here. <3 Also? I love that he calculated the percentage of a word that was choked on.

Dutch snorted, but his eyes were a little warm. "You're the one stuck on the thought, you can do the work."

These two are ridiculously cute. This is just one example of this.

Yasha had the feeling that Aodh had a tendency to punch with his boots and use his hands to set things on fire

*glee!* Yes. <3

And more heartmarks and fondness for the calculation white noise.

[taennyn]

Yeah, once the image coalesced enough to figure out what'd happened that line just burst across my consciousness like fireworks. It was great. :D

[klgaffney]

first reaction: oh my god the fucking cute. it makes my face hurt.

second reaction: oh my god the fucking cute. ow.

ahem. repeat a few more times.

the saluting always cracks me up. i don't know why.

Aodh grinned back, then did that creepy not-door fadeout where you could see the wall behind him before he was completely gone.

i've seen a fox without a smile, but a smile without a fox? =p

...and yeah. the cute. ow. and aw.

[taennyn]

If he's gone drinking with Chesh I don't want to know about it. >.>

The saluting and the resulting second-echo of the smile is kind of adorable. :)

[klgaffney]

ow. *snickering* that would be interesting.

*reads again* *cackles* they do forget they have noses--and that doormen have fists, and may have personalities that happen to be fiercely loyal to their units.

[darthneko]

eeeee! so CUTE. ♥