[Wild Roses] Second Chances

Jun 10, 2009 10:50

Title: a disorienting morning
'Verse/characters: Wild Roses; Phoebe and the Second Ian
Prompt: 00D "gone"
Word Count: 598
Notes: darthneko requested Phoebe, back in March. As always, I am rusty after a break, so this reads stiffer than it might.

She was sitting half-curled into an invisible chair when he woke, one of her knees drawn up and her skirt draping heavily from it. )

second chances, phoebe, list d, the second ian, wild roses

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coastal_physics June 10 2009, 23:34:11 UTC
I like the comfy as well.

this felt like it read rather well.

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taennyn June 11 2009, 02:24:42 UTC
this felt like it read rather well.

You can see why I wrote it before the other one today, though--the feel's pretty different, between the two.

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