Title: a disorienting morning
'Verse/characters: Wild Roses; Phoebe and the Second Ian
Prompt: 00D "gone"
Word Count: 598
Notes:
darthneko requested Phoebe, back in March. As always, I am rusty after a break, so this reads stiffer than it might.
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She was sitting half-curled into an invisible chair when he woke, one of her knees drawn up and her skirt draping heavily from it. )
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this felt like it read rather well.
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You can see why I wrote it before the other one today, though--the feel's pretty different, between the two.
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