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named_by_rhyme

[Wild Roses] after the wars

Feb 22, 2009 14:52

Title: dried to dust and dreams
'Verse/characters: Wild Roses [Last One Standing]; Aodh
Prompt: 47D "dirt"
Word Count: 152
Notes: dormouse_in_tea gave me a line of poetry as a spark.

( His skin didn't taste of cordite. )

list d, wild roses, aodh

Comments 6

dormouse_in_tea February 22 2009, 22:57:54 UTC

*grinning madly* dormouse WINZ.

billradish February 22 2009, 23:37:43 UTC

*purrs* I like this. I like the dance of sensory information. I do, however, think it could stand to be expanded.

coastal_physics February 23 2009, 00:31:41 UTC

Where is he?

(I'm having trouble linking the smell/taste of cordite with the dust and faint echos of spice)

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taennyn February 23 2009, 08:12:37 UTC

Aaaand the current tiara for best extraction of context goes to--

:)

larathia February 23 2009, 18:36:19 UTC

*chinhands* ...That *does* sound like Andeliin. It's not something Kickback notices unless it's right under his nose though - I think his sense of smell has all but shut down in most respects.