Comments | named_by_rhyme: [Wild Roses]

named_by_rhyme

[Wild Roses]

Mar 15, 2007 18:21

Title: cufflinks
’Verse/characters: Wild Roses; Kickback, Aodh
Prompt: 63C "negotiation"
Word Count: 413
Rating: PG
Notes: same notes as previous. Still after the wars, the viewpoint voice still anchors with larathia

( It shouldn't really have come as a surprise )

strider, borrowed threads, last one standing, wild roses, list c, aodh

Comments 3

doseki March 16 2007, 02:54:40 UTC

(I can type really) Heh. I like the way this flows. The way they interact, the descriptions, paints a very clear picture...plus one confesses to liking the way Aodh talks. :)

taennyn March 16 2007, 03:16:42 UTC

Thanks. I always have trouble striking a balance between getting lost in the description and not even giving a backdrop.

*laughs* It's distinctive, if nothing else.

billradish February 10 2009, 21:35:46 UTC

I hadn't seen this before, I don't think. Made of fail.

...wait, March 07. I forgive myself.

I like this, and the feel that there's details and subtext that we're missing. I like the fact that the results of the gang hassling the accountant is left unstated. It leaves me with the impression that the accountant was the one who came out ahead on that altercation, but there's nothing to say so directly.