[Witches' Horses] Witches' Horses

[named_by_rhyme]

Title: . . hel.
'Verse/characters: Witches' Horses; Sinclair
Prompt: 30A "once in a lifetime"
Word Count: 189
Notes: two to three weeks before arrest, for context. Because context keeps me from getting stabbed.

Comments

[billradish]

I note such things because I love.

Sinclair cursed, when the news came in that the great silver General would be gracing the terem with his presence, please do not take any special measures in response (but don't buy ammunition. His guards take exception to that sort of thing), and kept the damned engineer on the horse, just in case.

This sentence makes no sense if you remove the parenthetical comment. Possibly the beginning parenthesis should be after presence and before please? I think the commentary from general through response was intended as part of the news bulletin, but it seems like part of Sinclair's reaction.

Hi, I had the least to remark to on this one, as it was stage setting for the rest. Sorreh. Still love.

[taennyn]

Tha's fine--as you say, it's stage setting and will definitely undergo revision when it's getting threaded in. I think he actually heard a rumour in a bar and then Grammont confirmed, as opposed to an Official Announcement of any kind. Much swearing.

[coastal_physics]

yay for context :D