Comments | named_by_rhyme: [Wild Roses] Some Kind of Love Song

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[Wild Roses] Some Kind of Love Song

Feb 12, 2010 18:34

Title: dawn
'Verse/characters: Some Kind of Love Song; Arianhrod, Takashi
Prompt: 18D "under"
Word Count: 294
Notes: expanded from the spark "brown sugar sand", still fairly sketchy.

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( He's worn scars, but they've never been truth. )

arianhrod, some kind of love song, list d, takashi, wild roses

Comments 4

coastal_physics February 13 2010, 09:22:58 UTC

's a cute moment.

I like it.

darthneko February 13 2010, 17:06:30 UTC

awwww. That's lovely.

klgaffney February 15 2010, 00:33:41 UTC

i remembered the spark on this one. it expands pretty. and warm.
i still like the line i picked out this time, but i also like the "tall enough to prop his chin on the top of her head and fearless enough to <>do it." it makes me smile.

billradish February 17 2010, 01:36:12 UTC

tall enough to prop his chin on the top of her head and fearless enough to do it

I'm with Kammy on this line. <3

he's curling around under her hand, pulling his head from beneath the pillow and giving her a sleepy predator's smile.

*puuuurrrrrr*