Forsaking of love, it's only make-believe. {OneShot

Feb 12, 2010 20:37

Title. Forsaking of love, it's only make-believe .
Author. Me // Nakoo
Pairing(s). Akame (KamenashixAkanishi)
Genre. Angst.
Rating. G.
Disclaimers. Ha~ I don't own anything. Only my words.
Summary. "Loving you is bad for my health..."
Warning. Unbetaed. MalexMale Relationship. Angst. Bad writing, maybe so.

It's bad for your health. )

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shapika February 13 2010, 04:39:05 UTC
;___;

What what what.....

NO

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nakoo February 13 2010, 04:42:48 UTC
Ha? NO? OO
How crude. ^^x

It is that bad? 'M sorry. =)

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kristen_erika February 13 2010, 05:15:00 UTC
_this is angsty. VERY. and it tore my heart. tore it into many pieces.

thanks for a beautifully melancholic read.

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nakoo February 13 2010, 17:57:27 UTC
Haa~ It wasn't really what I wanted to do; tore your heart in many pieces. Would you like some glue? =) I'll glue it all back together and tada~.

=) It was my pleasure, the plot line (What plot line... xD) was stuck into my head for several weeks, so I HAD to get it out. I'm happy it is to your liking. <33

Thanks for the lovely comment.

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kristen_erika February 14 2010, 04:31:27 UTC
_~uwah! thanks for glue-ing my heart back together. XD

hope to see more of your work! ^_^

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nakoo February 14 2010, 18:05:17 UTC
Well, I broke it didn't I? So I should glue it back together. =)

If you didn't already see, I have more work on my LJ account, so if you have time, please read some more. ^^#

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hellen_181092 February 13 2010, 05:54:50 UTC
Hate the ending, but I can't say it's not good. It's well written and I like the feeling in it, painful and cold. Now when I read this, I had the image of Jin in his Natsu costume and smoking, so touching. I know it's nothing Bandage related, but sorry, I can't help the image of Jin in it. I guess u already read the review for that film, I read too and gosh, they all said about the last kiss of him. I especially love that part in this fic too. So much passion in that kiss and also it's his last one. So sad. D:

Do you intend to write sequel? I think this fic can develop into a multi chap one.

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nakoo February 13 2010, 18:02:34 UTC
HA! Don't hate the ending. I suck at endings but don't hate it. That's bad; hating. It's angsty, right, the ending I mean. It's so saad that he quits both... And here people always complain about him smoking. Dadadidada. I made people want him to smoke. I'm just a genius (NOT!)
Ha really? Jin as Natsu? I'm sure it's possible. He may have been a bit Natsu-ish in my composition. Not bad, Sweetheart... Maybe it's true. =P
Ha yes, the kiss in Bandage. I'm so curious about how that turns out.
Unh? You liked it? =D I'm happy, You make me very happy.

Maybe... I'll write a sequel for Paper hearts made of tears before... It's already started that sequel... Maybe I'll make a multi out of this too. If I ever finish my two multies I already started...

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dorayaki_chan February 13 2010, 05:59:25 UTC
Wawawiwa love the stinging pain this fic made :)

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nakoo February 13 2010, 18:03:23 UTC
Ha? You did?! <3 SO sweet.
That's very kind of you, really.

Thank you for liking my creation! ^^#

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alreem8 February 13 2010, 10:50:16 UTC
sooo beautiful yet sooo painful..
I loved the way you wrote it..
The scene is so heartbreaking.

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nakoo February 13 2010, 18:05:11 UTC
You did? I was so unsure about how the whole thing was written. I was just so stressed out and was getting hyper when I was reading the thing again. I'm very pleased you liked it. <3

SHANK YOU.

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