Fiction. Don't Deny Me

[nakeisha]

TITLE: Don't Deny Me
AUTHOR: Nikki Harrington
FANDOM: Raffles: The Amateur Cracksman
PAIRING: A. J. Raffles/Harry 'Bunny' Manders
GENRE: Slash
SUB-GENRE: First Time
SUMMARY: An afternoon on the river leads to other things.
RATING: R
WORD COUNT: 1,986
DISCLAIMER: I don't own these characters, nor am I making any money from them. I merely borrow them

Comments

[psychedk]

D'awwwwwwwwwwww. They are forever the cutest couple on Earth ;_;

[nakeisha]

Thank you very much indeed.

They are wonderful together, I do agree.

[nakeisha]

Thank you so much.

*Smiles* I think sometimes even the cool, calm Raffles has to be somewhat flustered - I'm glad it worked for you.

[mcicioni]

Loved it. The language sounds authentic, your Raffles is a great mix of dominance, competence and respect, and the final paragraphs, where cricket, love and sex are intertwined, are a total delight.

I particularly love Bunny's naivete in thinking of calls of nature, and Raffles' restraint in not touching Bunny until they close the doors of his Albany rooms.

[nakeisha]

Thank you so much. I'm really pleased to hear you enjoyed this so much.

I'm glad you found the language authentic and Raffles a good mix and enjoyed the way cricket, love and sex were entwined.

Bless him - well it's the natural thought, I'd say *g*

Thank you for reading and commenting.

[makeanewworld]

This is lovely. Echoing what others say above, but your Bunny-voice is perfect - it's so utterly him, with all his hesitancy but total adoration of Raffles.

[nakeisha]

Thank you so much.

I'm really glad to hear you enjoyed this and that you too find my Bunny-voice to be spot on.

Thank you.

[derien]

*applause!* & <3!

[nakeisha]

*Takes a bow*

Thank you very much indeed.