Comments | nakannalee: Fic: Decameron part 2, Cam/H one-sided, H/W

nakannalee

Fic: Decameron part 2, Cam/H one-sided, H/W

Sep 03, 2006 20:48

Fic: Decameron, part 2/10
Author: Nakanna Lee
Pairing: Cam/H one-sided, H/W
Rating: PG-13 -- R
A/N: Hoping to post these installments reguarly... Enjoy, feedback appreciated as always. :)

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DAY TWO

You’ve cut your hair and expect it to symbolize some drastic, personal change.

But life goes on ( Read more... )

decameron

Comments 26

fallen_arazil September 4 2006, 05:36:15 UTC

Oooooooh, this is really good. You paint Cameron in a very unsympathetic light in some ways, and pityable in others ... it's very interesting the way you manage to convey what's actually happening and what Cam thinks is happening at the same time.

Lovely, really. Looking forward to more!

~Djinn

baba_o_reily September 4 2006, 05:42:57 UTC

still loving it!

peapods42 September 4 2006, 06:08:01 UTC

Man, that girl is fucked up. This is really...well someone used the word spooky and really that's the only thing to say on that front. There are these little hints that stare Cameron in the face saying "this is real and this is love," but she absolutely refuses to see it. Her placing of House on this pedestal while Wilson is portrayed as the tempting devil is...creepy. I mean we all know that Wilson is just a little on the messed up side, but wow.

Awaiting next part with bated breath.

i_heart_cameron September 9 2006, 22:36:32 UTC

You know why Cameron is so fucked up?

THIS FIC IS COMPLETELY OUT OF CHARACTER

nakannalee September 9 2006, 23:21:15 UTC

I think what's great about the show is that the characters can be taken so many different ways. (Just look at some of the dark!Wilson fics, or even some of Chase's.) There have been times in canon when Cameron has been manipulative or clingy, just as she has also been the moral conscience in other instances.

This is just one take on her, a darker one. In the show, after all, there is no H/W and no chance to spy without being caught. If there WAS, I think Cameron would be curious, and concerned enough for House to take more forward actions.

I'm not saying Cam's a bad person. I think she's very convinced that everything she does has good intentions.

i_heart_cameron September 9 2006, 23:23:38 UTC

Declined.

evila_elf September 4 2006, 07:59:36 UTC

Wow!

Took me part of the way through the first part to get use to it, but once I did...hehe!!

Poor Cameron *snicker* She doesn't seem to have a clue. I was getting quite the chuckle at her observations. Too bad she freaked and ran away!

Looking forward to more of this!

fauxpocky September 4 2006, 09:17:56 UTC

Ohh, this is creepy. You're painting such a vivid picture of this aspect of Cameron. I often find this part of her character grating in canon, it's what I like least about her, and what I think drives House to push her away, no matter how attractive he may find her.

This is a really fascinating examination of her dark side, and the second person voice is a remarkably effective tool for it. I can't wait for the next part.