one out of seven billion

Dec 03, 2012 06:50


One out of Seven Billion
Kai/Krystal
Slice of life, romance | 3215 words
-- based on this quote
that's why i fell in love with you the moment we met )

#oneshot, *f(x), *exo, ♥ kai/krystal

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keyterm December 6 2012, 03:44:43 UTC
gahh this was wonderful ♥

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kirakirashahida December 6 2012, 03:56:33 UTC
You're wonderful too :) thank you!

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pearlfuchsia December 9 2012, 06:20:56 UTC
This is just gorgeous ;~; ♥ I love how you took us through their lives and all the obstacles they encountered on their way to finally getting together. That's how love really is for some people. Sometimes it can take nearly your whole life to realize the one you're meant to be with has been right in front of your face the whole time.

Beautiful story, thank you for sharing :3

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kirakirashahida December 9 2012, 16:35:37 UTC
I was going to add more but then I thought 'well they've had enough obstacles so let's stop here' haha. Thank you for reading ♥

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flyingberry December 9 2012, 10:45:22 UTC
Wow, I mean wow.

Because sometimes you need to travel so far just to realize that home is where the heart is.

That line blew me away. I love it! I love that you kept them meeting over the years and seriously the best part is in the end they don't ignore their feelings.
You're a great writer btw :)

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kirakirashahida December 9 2012, 16:38:06 UTC
I don't deserve the wow ;~; ♥ Thank you very much!

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wintercreamed December 9 2012, 14:05:25 UTC
/spot for me bb ok/

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wintercreamed December 9 2012, 14:37:46 UTC
finished at last. I'm pretty speechless. I mean how do you maintain pacing, I can never ever do this. Can I just sit here and admire that forever. I mean usually when fics go long, readers tend to go bored and I know that because my fics do that but yours simply wasn't! It had that factor that sucked readers to the end. Paired with that beautiful writing, I can't be more amazed. This was so gorgeous bb. ♥♥
I'm adding it to fave fics. :)

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kirakirashahida December 9 2012, 16:43:41 UTC
And I was going to write more but I was scared it'd be too long and I'd bore people. But I love your long fics! Honestly while I was writing this I had your recent seokyu fic as a reference because I love the pacing for that! Like I told you once you have this ability to make your readers put themselves into your character's shoes so we get sucked into the story. Thank you very much Elle ♥♥

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maixkeigo December 14 2012, 07:21:36 UTC
This was truly amazing and touching. I seriously am crying right now.
It took them 30 years....This was one of the most romanticist fanfics I've read in a while!

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kirakirashahida December 14 2012, 12:09:15 UTC
daww /hands tissues
Thank you so much for reading ♥

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