Comments | nakanaiyo: puzzle pieces (2/2)

kirakirashahida in nakanaiyo

puzzle pieces (2/2)

Jan 08, 2018 14:52

puzzle pieces
jiho/cha eunwoo, twins jiho/mingyu, mingyu/mina

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( Being friendless doesn't sound that unappealing now, especially with friends like this. )

*oh my girl, #oneshot, ♥ mingyu/mina, *astro, ♥ cha eunwoo/jiho, *twice, *seventeen

Comments 7

se0ulmate January 8 2018, 10:41:09 UTC

HELLO OKAY WHAT AT THIS HOUR I WAS SUPPOSED TO NAP ( ... )

kirakirashahida February 17 2018, 08:33:57 UTC

hello here is my reply 4675218 years later

idk honestly i started writing this for my own amusement, but i never intended to work on it properly bc of the other 97-line wip? but then i thought this was easier to write and also this has more eunu ahahahahaha. there's a lot of things going on here and a lot of things that i can talk about, but i'd rather not rant about it here lol so you can ask me questions if you want? this is probably my personal favourite after light years

since i finished this (16k at that) now let's pretend that other wip doesn't exist

kurdoodle January 9 2018, 05:52:59 UTC

WOW omg this is so good shida i actually can't at this masterpiece. how do you make it so dramatic but also relatable but also cute but also emotional... i love it when i see the character progressions and can actually feel the butterflies in my stomach when jiho realizes that she likes eunwoo and during the whole entire confession scene like DANG EUNWOO IS HONESTLY SO SMOOTH i think i might have fallen in love with him too, oops. like just imagining his attractive face and his eye smile and him following jiho around is just so adorable. and ofc mingyu/jiho as twins are always a favorite! it's so realistic, how they butt heads and know how to annoy each other but also know how comfort each other and stand up for each other. and also like lisa mentioned... we really don't deserve mina, she is honestly so sweet... did really well to balance all the rest of the craziness in this fic xD overall i am so impressed (like omg 16k words?! what?!) and will reread this whenever i decide to go on a rollercoaster of emotions again. oh man the ( ... )

kirakirashahida February 17 2018, 08:50:03 UTC

thank you for reading this despite how busy you are! i miss you T______T

eunu in this fic was in a way influenced by his character in the drama the best hit, he was so snarky and fun there so that image was kinda imprinted in my mind. lol i used to ship mingyu/jiho back then but i can't remember when and how did i start liking their dynamic as twins more. also i realized i write a lot about siblings lately? your first twins mingyu/jiho fic is still the cutest :(

aperturistic January 11 2018, 12:13:46 UTC

SHIDASHI!!!!! i'm sorry it took me too long to comment haha

this was so enjoyable to read! i got really 심쿵 in a lot of parts bc minagyu is so ideal and also eunu's perfect face.

ANYWAY the ~hidden meaning~ clicked for me in this line!!!! "Admitting that she’s in love with Cha Eunwoo is proven harder than acing an exam, in all honesty."

that was...a very shida line....like something u would say about him hehehehehehe pls stop denying your love for tea and accept wholeheartedly like jiho in this fic ♥

p.s. u know i am very guilty about setting that word count but I'M SO PROUD OF YOU FOR ACCOMPLISHING THIS HEHE

this has been very satisfying until the end and A GREAT START TO YOUR 2018 ♥♥♥

aperturistic January 11 2018, 12:14:41 UTC

"He's chuckling, eyes turning into the crescent shape, which she really did miss, even though he shouldn’t be entertained by any of this."

THIS LINE IS ALSO VERY YOU KE

kirakirashahida February 17 2018, 08:52:41 UTC

i'm grateful for all your help really and i love you but shut up yeyn