oh goshhhh rereading this just reminds me of how beautifully written and transitioned this fic is. i love the dynamics between both relationships ((especially siblings!jr/chorong how come i never thought of this before???)) and how in the end, it's heading for the greener pastures, especially woohyun/chorong ;;;; aww bb suzy finally pushing herself for once and i can only imagine how happy jinyoung is when he received the texts from her ;;;;
oh God i love this fic soooo much shida i can't believe i only got to comment this months later T____T thank you for writing this senpai <3
lol actually when i was planning the fic i didn't think of siblings jr/chorong at all. my initial idea was a scene between jr and woohyun but i couldn't figure out how they could be close friends haha
it's ok at least you came back unlike that chingu /shades
first i love how you went from jr/suzy to jr/chorong then woohyun/chorong it was such a nice narrative swing. and i love jr/suzy's relationship, how she seems really dependent on him and totally incapable of taking care of herself but then she proves herself and i love how jr is a struggling musician who works in fast food. save those precious fingers jay r
i love how quiet and non-descriptive it is with woohyun/chorong, like their situation is just described in what they say and the way they behave in each other and how chorong notices such little things about woohyun argh my feels PLEASE DON'T GET DIVORCED BBs
i am totally going to write a jr/suzy now u r an inspiration senpai *____*
i actually had to scrape off another scene and more details to keep the fic this way so i was worried that it might have turned out a little too confusing instead. but i'm glad you noticed those little things about their relationships!
please finish that jr/suzy draft in your notebook senpai *____*
hi i read this a long time ago but never commented but i appreciate the atmosphere of this piece so much. like it's calm but also... aching? idk. love the seamless transitions between the pairings, how jr/chorong ties everything together. i love siblings in fics. so nice. ugh jinyoung is such a fool for suzy but he totally knows it and you know what? i love how there's a tinge of hope - that things are improving!! and woorong, ugh my heart breaks. but like, i hope it's not too late to rekindle their relationship ♥
i'm sorry i forgot to reply! i love slow burn fics lol and yes siblings! i'm writing two siblings fics right now and already thinking of another hahahaha. thanks a lot hannah!
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oh goshhhh rereading this just reminds me of how beautifully written and transitioned this fic is. i love the dynamics between both relationships ((especially siblings!jr/chorong how come i never thought of this before???)) and how in the end, it's heading for the greener pastures, especially woohyun/chorong ;;;; aww bb suzy finally pushing herself for once and i can only imagine how happy jinyoung is when he received the texts from her ;;;;
oh God i love this fic soooo much shida i can't believe i only got to comment this months later T____T thank you for writing this senpai <3
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lol actually when i was planning the fic i didn't think of siblings jr/chorong at all. my initial idea was a scene between jr and woohyun but i couldn't figure out how they could be close friends haha
it's ok at least you came back unlike that chingu /shades
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first i love how you went from jr/suzy to jr/chorong then woohyun/chorong it was such a nice narrative swing. and i love jr/suzy's relationship, how she seems really dependent on him and totally incapable of taking care of herself but then she proves herself and i love how jr is a struggling musician who works in fast food. save those precious fingers jay r
i love how quiet and non-descriptive it is with woohyun/chorong, like their situation is just described in what they say and the way they behave in each other and how chorong notices such little things about woohyun argh my feels PLEASE DON'T GET DIVORCED BBs
i am totally going to write a jr/suzy now u r an inspiration senpai *____*
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i actually had to scrape off another scene and more details to keep the fic this way so i was worried that it might have turned out a little too confusing instead. but i'm glad you noticed those little things about their relationships!
please finish that jr/suzy draft in your notebook senpai *____*
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